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so how come yuzu didn't mind extreme skinship in the past and now that it's revealed that she was in love since ages ago she's so self-conscious? it's like her character has changed tremendously in only 2 chapters, no consistency at all

If you’re referring to what they did when they were little, that might just be an example of childhood innocence. If your referring to Yuzu’s actions earlier in the story, it seems like she had done a pretty good job suppressing her feelings until the cultural festival, so I would just assume that she’s becoming too conscious of it now that her feelings have welled back up. Either way, I wouldn’t call it completely inconsistent, just somewhat.

^ That, or the author is just playing a conspiracy game with us, like with Half-Life 1, where the readers are the ones who know more than the writer and let them fill in the gaps, and purposely (hopefully not and makes some pages to explain) avoids explaining so stuff keeps its hook until another major event or a major flaw or inconsistency is found, and all the entertaining cuteness falls into nothing.

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joined Aug 29, 2019

I dont know if the dynamic of older woman trying to resist tentation and behave accordingly, and younger one been the persistent and pushing force to getting in a romantic relationship was already made into a series, and even uploaded here, but I really would like one like that, the potencial for something deep and romantic, or just comedy and light drama/slice of life could also be great material with that kind of dynamic.

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They gayming!

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I mean, the inicial plot of, as the title says, made it sound, at least in my head, that this will be like Impossible, and then we need to resort to team work and some clever and unique situation to try to reach to Yuzu in a way she gets the hints. But with the "lol she really meant back then that we HAVE to stay as friends, so let's do that if that is what Minami wants" (cheap) twist, now it's like "easy mission for Minami, but we need Yuzu to stop thinking like that and just go confess/dont ingore the hint", because if Minami is the one confessing, then good, but is less impactful as a resolution of the plot IMO.

At this point, if I (hopefully We) want this development to the confession to be more impactful and interesting, the author needs something a bit more dark and maybe depressing (since we got that "cheap/overused" dark twist about Yuzu's past) event. My idea is (It doesnt has to be exact, Im kind of oversimplyfing here): Minami goes on another date with Yuzu, but this one is a more thoughtful one so she is able to have more coraguoe to confess to Yuzu, Minami work hard for this special date, and she gets to confess ((maybe as best as she could)) but Yuzu forces her twisted "reality/TRAUMA" into the actions MInami takes to reach her heart, and again dismisses the signal of romance and plays dumb. MInami then gets fed-up and starts to cry, showing how tired is she from failing numeous times ((I feel like this fits well with her personality, since she also got emotional and twisted things a couple of times)), and Yuzu, still in her world, worries a lot for her from the sudden burst of tears of Minami. Minami runs away, Yuzu goes after her but failed to keep up with her and looses her.
Yuzu, confused and tired, wonders why this happened on the spot, and suddenly Kamiya confronts Yuzu, asking her: what is worng with you? You broke her heart by doing your thing again! explain yourself!
Yuzu goes again about how she heard from Minami when kids, " heard very loud and clear(cause trauma)", "Let's be BFF" from Minami to her. And Kamiya rages on Yuzu: And that's it?! you are constanlty living in the past, of course you will fear the posibility of ruinning the only most precious thing you have from then. BUT stop it! kids can be dumb, so your destiny is not set in stone for that, you can still change, people can change, so go fing her and tell her how you REALLY feel. Dont only think in the probabilities of failing, because while you have some probabilities of succeding, it is still worth to give your shot at big move like this... (something like that, can't think of something more epic/original)
Yuzu after some hours of looking for MInami, finds her, still crying, and Yuzu approaches her, making sure she hears her, proceeds to apologies for how she treated her and it was her fault, how I loved you so much that I tried so hard make your wish of being BFF to stay true, BUT I was the one who didn't want to grow up, I didn't want to change, I didn't want to be separated from you if something came between us. I never forgot all the things you did for me, you wanted me to be better and I just could thanks to you,Yes I love you and thanks for loving me back as you do... (details details).

If you, dear reader, have some opinions, I'm glad to read them! Have a nice day!

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So more people thought the same as me, damm I hate to be right in this situation... The potencial and hope one had for this serie, and it fell into an overused MC realization moment, what a way to loose the big hook for readers... Well, at least it has the cute factor and humor, and some hope that the confesion is somewhat memorable.

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Really fluffy and sweet story, until the last 5 chapters, TongTong's mom could have been a more interesting addition to a "possibly ideal" intervention on how to deal with this situation in a more mature and less "traditional oriental" way. But yeah, it ended up rushed and it needed to finish in "just fine", specially notisable on TT's mom unable to help in a meaningfull way (to me, it hinted lots of potencial for mature adult's moment to solve things and have life changing realizations for better)
So, a common development of the resolution part, and a lot of missed potencial due to external reasons, what a shame, but still pretty recommendable material!♥.

last edited at Oct 30, 2023 10:04AM

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Noda Nonda discussion 26 May 18:13
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Good sense of humor, like the art :)
alsoniceyuri!

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joined Aug 29, 2019

Thanks 4 TL! another material that I'll soon buy :)
Happy for them that the two MC are alright? ... nice Ending!♥

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Good manners please, your are in front of people.... -_-

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It started wholesome and romantic, then it got hot and passionate!♥
Thanks for the translation!

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Thanks for the TL!
I wonder if buying this comical material from the author, it will make me a lolicon-ally? ☻

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Getting interesting and can possibly get deeper in some psycologic stuff ♥
Thanks for the trasnlation!

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Rest In Poweroutage ☺

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Picturesct! Love it <3♥

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Negom NSFW Best NSFW :)

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The tall one reminds me of Raven from RWBY :)
Lovely art!

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hey guys, just wanna ask, is it weird if straight man (me for example) like yuri?

It's not wierd, this is just girls interacting in a affectional ways that can look like romantic interactions, or even be real
mutually romantic interactions :)
I know I few girls that like Yaoi and are straight, as far as I know, and one that is lesbian but watches Yaoi.
Just enjoy what you like, and don't be shy about it if you can share this liking in yuri with someone that also reads manga, just be you!

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The Betock art is something else, in my opinion, I love them! But this story kind of went a bit wierd? stockholm syndrome?
The characters where not that developed to know "for sure" what are they feeling, not that is needed, that is the point of this short, so then, I don't know for sure how and what to take from this...
Thanks for the translation!

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It went from 0 to 200 very quickly! Wuuutt?! I don't want to think what can come next to mend things, my head just hurts from all this....

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Need more of Lactation! Relaxing and lovely to see <3

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Adorable 2x

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"I can show you the Yuri-world"♫

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Hi! Is there a way to change the list's order? I kind of miss the "recently added" order they have before, also, I love the tabs, that one is a nice feature!

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Is that cat alive or is a statue?

Very lovely art too!

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Milktea discussion 04 Mar 21:30
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Very touchy and cool material! Thanks for TL!