Dynasty Scans
joined Oct 10, 2010
I have formed a new (very small) scanlation group named "Fly by Yuri" and we would like to upload our first project to dynasty scans. At this time there are no plans for a web site. Would I need to upload it to media fire and submit an upload request? I could give you our groups email and details on the project on the request form. Or is there a better way?
By the way, this is NOT an April fools joke.
I'm happy to see more Hiyori Otsu on the reader, but I think this release is unfinished. This is constructive well meaning critisism, I swear. Don't take it as a personal attack, I really am looking forward to more from your group if you have good enough taste to do Hiyori Otsu's work. So bear with me on this, I promise I'm not trying to be mean.
The dialog doesn't sound like natural English, and either needs to be proofed more efficiently or re-translated and proofed again from the beginning. Also, the dialog in the word bubbles is way too big. It needs to be smaller and more centered in the bubbles. IT LITERALLY READS LIKE SOMEONE IS YELLING ALL THE TEXT! Mata, romaji no nihongo wo shiyo shinaide kudasai. *
- For you BAKA GAIJIN who don't understand the master language that is Japanese, that means "Also, don't use roman character Japanese."
When you use things like -chan -san and -sama you start sounding like Ai-san. These are only acceptable when they're necessary to understand the relationship between characters better (this is a one-shot, so I don't find them necessary in this case because they don't really reveal much about the girls' relationships), or if it's incorporated into their name and identity of a character (like Ritchan-san from Fruits Basket for example). The use of "Star-sama" and "baka" on the other hand isn't tasteful. You could use something like "all powerful stars" or something, and "idiot".
Punctuation isn't optional, a sentence within a bubble should never end without punctuation unless it continues in another bubble. Sound effects can be with or without punctuation.
Since you're a brand new group, this is a good learning experience and I'd be willing to help with proofing if you hop in the IRC again, so please do your best on a second draft,
last edited at Apr 1, 2013 9:30AM