Wow. Nice one, albeit shorter than expected.

Is this heading to the yandere route?

That was good.

Oh...

Holly shit! I was not expecting this, hell yeah! I think I woke up everyone here screaming the moment I saw the kiss. GO MARIA!!!

You just know with how Hiro does thing that their kiss is gonna be in full color and the lighting will be fucking immaculate

Yess! Ah I can't, they are just so cute!

Oh. My. Gah. Heck yessss!

Kurohime my beloved, I need your love to succeed. Mocchi, make Toudou, Rin and Kurohime a throuple, and my life is yours.

THIS!

Awww, cute.

If a person is bedridden with a fever, it's not a cold. I really hate this trope. Call it something else.

I mean, it can be a way to distinguish the cold-induced fevers from the more serious ones (flu/etc).

Colds don't induce fevers. If there's a fever, it isn't a cold.

Japanese colds have fevers, okay?

XD

Same here, notifications are working again, thank you very much! Mine just stopped, not in spam nor anything so it was a very pleasant surprise when I noticed then coming through.

OMG... I can't wait for next chapter, but aye, Maria what are you doing? DX

Found this when searching through my favs, so sad there are no updates, this was really good

Rereading this from ch1 to last.. just wonderful. This goes straight to favs for sure <3

Oooh Estella-chan got it! i hope that helps, eventually, somehow...

I can't believe it's completed already, it was really good. I'll miss their crazy antics and Non-chan's follow up reactions :(

Happy ending... ಠ_ಠ

This was me as well, after reading this... I mean, ok... They're all happy... right?

Ah, I missed this one so much, glad to see an update

Aaaahhhhhh

Ah, this was so good <3

oohh...

I kinda want to know what the original is, but I'm also afraid to look it up

^ XD

Oh dear

The credits page answers my question so I appreciate it. I wanted more tho– •́⁠ ⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠,⁠•̀

Aye, indeed :(
But it was really cute