Mm, that's good despair

Yeah, this is one of my personal favorites

Though I have to say that the sheer difference in tone from everything else I've seen the author write is striking

Courtesy of Hylarn.

Ahaha. Don't expect this to ever happen again

Kinda iffy on two of those tags, open to suggestions.

Mato x Yomi and Yuri? It's kind of tacked on, but still present

Thanks for this and sharing the other stuff in the thread, by the way.

Just doing my part to spread the BRS

I think I'm fine with it ending here. If the story was about their relationship this'd be pretty horrible, but it's about Yuu's growth

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For completion's sake, the other doujin mentioned: http://hijiribe.donmai.us/pools/5128

If there's a rogue editor around, it'd be pretty easy to do, what with having four pieces of text

...Or I could do it if you don't mind the the text being slightly aliased

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There's a couple others on Danbooru

Actual doujin, not just translated comics? I'd appreciate it if you could link me to any you know of.

Seconded. All I ever saw was the short by alphonse and a few one-page pixiv entries.

Well, in the strictest sense , that's the only doujin. But there's a couple Pixiv series that are reasonably long

...Only one of which is translated

Specifically, this: http://hijiribe.donmai.us/pools/5047 (I don't know what kind of coding the forums here use)

Shame this is the only scanned BRS yuri doujin in existence.

Only hard-translated one, anyway. There's a couple others on Danbooru

Oh, this thing. I'm not certain why they didn't just make it an original story

Well, that dealt with most of the issues I had with the first chapter. Via retcons that don't make much sense, but still

Splitting them by series would make things slightly easier. On the other hand, I can't really think of any benefit to keeping them lumped together. So, if you feel up to splitting, go for it, but I don't blame you if you don't think it's worth the hassle

The group listed is Gaku, but it credits itself to SMDC...

what's that at the end? a touhou fan-game i didn't know?
i was sure i played every touhou-jrpg ...

Looks like a VN rather than an RPG, and there's "This project is a lie." at the bottom right...

Eh, I don't think the spinoffs have really done much to the main series' pace. Unless you mean you'd like Igarashi to take over the art for it

Typical scenario, but fairly well done

"'I love you'. Wait, no, I meant 'I love you'"

Heh

That's an odd way of adapting it, skipping the first episode and super-abbreviating the second. Especially with the rest of it being so faithful

Art's better than the show, at least

I'm reasonably fond of Nanoha, but having her beat up the entire Madoka cast and solve all the problems just pisses me off. She shouldn't know everything that's going on, much less have any kind of solution

Also I'm not certain how this has a second chapter?

This is sweet and sad at the same time. Tsk I wish there would be a second season of Puella Magi Madoka Magica... One of those series where people want a second season and yet never get it :(

...The sequel movie is scheduled for October 26

Also, this is a good story. I'd of liked a bit more yuri, but it was still quite cute and entertaining

This really doesn't work that well outside of the original context (responses to each episode of the second season)

Usual Stripe Pattern incomprehensibility and darkness, but Sakuya is at least a reasonable character to apply it to

This is kinda fucked up...guro? snuff? Is this mangaka aware of what pesticide does to insects? It's like nerve poison...I cringe every time I see the cockroach girl get doused in it.

I think she's immortal? More or less explicitly immune to poison, and stomping just knocks her out for a bit

[...] cockroaches are freakin' filthy. Seeing all the cockroach things they do completely suppresses my moe instinct.

Huh, I guess I should be glad to live in the frozen north. Never having seen a cockroach allows me to enjoy this

It's been pretty damn good. Which feels weird to say. I didn't really like the first season

As for the yuri subtext, they seem to be going for everyone x everyone. Which is kind of annoying, though I suppose they couldn't do much more with Hibiki x Miku without canonizing it

Oh good, I'd been hoping to see this here. The latest chapter bringing us some actual yuri instead of just subtext helps, too.

They've said that Shokuhou's appearance in S was just a treat for fans; she's not going to show up again until the third season

...Also, she doesn't really act much like how this doujin portays her

Huh, I wasn't expecting this much drama. Can't say I mind, though