I am still afraid of the ending on the Oneshot, and this current development isn't helping on the slightest!
I feel like this works more in favor of it not ending like the one shot. She's feeling jealous? Possessiveness is nine tenths of the law! I mean. If she's feeling jelly then it would seem she would be more willing to keep this relationship going.
I love this story. As I've already said several times. I'd prefer it ended like the one shot as I feel their aren't enough stories that really explore a failing relationship(that I come across anyway) but I'd be ok with them ending up going the distance.
The side story with the guy finding out about his friend being gay was well done. It's nice that he tries to be chill but isn't necessarily great at it.
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