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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I love the color coding

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Mew having two sets of tits is bizarre, if the author wanted mew to be a real catgirl like colleen haskel in "the animal" then he should have given her 4 sets for a total of eight nipples, why does she have only half???

This entire thing has VERY specific fetishes at play here, never have I seen kinky situations delivered so confidently and directly and we're still just at the 5th chapter

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I dont know what the fuck is happening and why the author had enough confidence to publish this plot but Im reading it

"Mew pussyleo"

last edited at Mar 24, 2021 6:40AM

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

This artist makes the most erotic comedy doujins in the world, I love it

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Some light hearted yuri is always good

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Is it polygamy if you do your lover three times at the same time?

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I thought this was going to be a fluffy vampire yuri...

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I hope this has a competent story or atleast fun chapters

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

All these people saying "The mom is unrealistic!"

Like, yeah, clearly, the mom who literally just fucked off after her divorce and left her teenage daughter to live by herself and fend for herself, to the point that she was just skipping school entirely at the start of the series....That parent is a bad parent? What shock! What stunning and contrived drama! Why I can't believe it at all! /s

Guys. Sora's mom was always going to be awful. She was visibly neglectful with her mere absence. She abandoned her kid and left her to live alone, without supervision. If Ayaka hadn't come to get her, she'd have flunked the year and been about to be held back a year by now. At best.

She was -already- an abusive parent, this just cemented that that abuse is also physical.

If you think it's contrived, I have news for you. You know someone with an abusive parent. Some of you may not know you do, because they don't talk about it, but they're there, participating in your daily life. And given that Honda's mom was visibly abusive, she was always going to be a natural impediment to their relationship in one way or another. The seeds for this "sudden twist" were in chapter one.

That doesn't mean you gotta like it! You can dislike the twist, you can not want to see that kind of content. If you just don't like it, I don't have a problem with that. But it's not unrealistic, it's not unlikely, it's not even contrived, and it is definitely not sudden. Some tropes are common because the events they depict are also common.

Sora was -introduced- as a character with visibly awful parents, that's why when mom showed back up, a lot of us knew she was going to be an obstacle, because we already knew she was awful.

Writing this wall after a whole page of people saying it's realistic is very bad timing.

Which is funny, since that is exactly what people were complaining about in regards to the mother. With good cause. Because this wall of text is wrong in one particular aspect, the mother is contrived. The contrivance arises from her timing, not her actual depiction. She is a realistic character, yes. Her sudden appearance in and of itself is also not a problem. Her sudden appearance at exactly this point in the story? Contrived.

And people pointed this out several times already, but the wall of text above chose to ignore that point completely. Why did she not suddenly appear sooner? Or why did she not suddenly appear after the girls have been together for a while? Instead, she suddenly appeared at exactly this point in the story, just when the main couple had finally worked through their communication problems and connected. Literally the same day the girls managed to overcome the barrier between them, the mother appears.

In other words, previous issues got resolved and there was no more drama, no more conflict, and immediately we get the mother. She was not even needed as a story element to progress the narrative. Imagine for a moment if she appeared before the girls solved their issues. Her appearance could then have had a purpose, to spur the main couple to reach out to one another and get over the barrier in their communication, because they would now be faced with the prospect of being separated for good, before they even had a chance to fully realise and express what they mean to each other.

But nope, all of that gets resolved and then literally on the same day, bam! Mother is home. And an entirely new and separate conflict thus begins.

If the mother showed up after them dating it would have had a bigger impact, we'd have a lovers being seperated narrative instead of "my friend is going to go to a different town"

Oh what could have been

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I wonder if ruby will be just as thirsty for IRL azurite when she finds out, im all for it when that happens

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Lmao when did this have a perma blackmail tag

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

director hamburg just did a dine n' dash

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Slow Start discussion 11 Mar 22:51
Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

The art is really expressive for a 4koma, i like how the characters come out of the borders and background effects like sparkles go outside of the panels

Makes it seem more dynamic

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

The way this artist draws mouths is very distinctive

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

What happened to sayo's arrows? Has she lost her love?

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

"an OC who resembles reimu hakurei"?

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Shichoson is the M night shyamalan of yuri hentai

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Pretty interesting reading through this and noticing noyama's art style evolving to a more unique style, just like reading through otome no teikoku and watching torajirou's style become refined

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Oi oi oi, you cant say the new one is hornymaru and NOT show us her interactions with yoshiko

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Always wishing for more every time a chapter ends :(

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

Manga artists always think they’re slick when they draw the “plain” character with glasses having no eyes, and then make a big deal about revealing their eyes when they take off the glasses acting like the glasses were what made them plain and not the literal lack of eyeballs

And yet when its hair covering the eyes they end up as the MC who fucks all the other characters, isn't that just odd?

last edited at Feb 22, 2021 11:18AM

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Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

While hilarious, I still feel like come rain or shine is worlds better than this one, hope it continues that trend and doesn't add the student council for no reason like in comprehensive tovarisch

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

plebian marika hasn't read far enough into futaribeya to realize sakurako and kazumi are joined at the hip and pracically married

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

I like how neither of them batted an eye over the fact that they're long-lost (half) sisters

they wouldn't have batted an eye if they were full sisters, the only yuri i've seen where the characters are hesitant about incest is that mother x daughter one

Rsz_wa
joined Sep 5, 2019

one of the hottest smut to come out this year, I hope this mangaka releases more work cause I can't find their twitter or pixiv