Good art and composition. Terrible writing.

This is the kind of comment I never quite get. I can imagine reasons a person might criticize the writing in this one, but I don’t see it as self-evidently awful.

Can you be more specific about what’s so “terrible” about the writing?

"My love is different than your love", "We're dating but not dating", "I love you, but I don't know what love is". Basically author is already draging this story by using stupid plot elements.

Oh hell no it real life for you it kindda like more than friend less than lover. I know because the same happen to me ( yes it kindda like the manga). It just that the other was not ready and wasn't sure about what she felt was love or just like.

What I was trying to say is that what Kino doing is being nice because she like a kid just grown into adulthood, it overwhelming enough and she experience a lot of complicate emotion. Just give her time to develop and grow because you can't say yes no if you not even understand enough about yourself.

Ah nothing better than the love between father and son whose mother is his father's half-sister ( if you follow the lore you will know why I using this kind of personal pronoun). This is such Mocchi :3

Well some how I actually like this one shot, maybe it the art or the story or maybe both.
And beside I vote for her friend to be with her, sometime we don't know that the one who actually care and want be a cavewoman with you is always right next to you.

I don't understand the M. Night Shyamalan thing. Can someone explain?

Watch some of his films.

So much cheating yet so funny.

This and the last pages are so heart-warming, For some reason it can be so sweet when the kiss isn't directly shown like in these.

yeah i agree it just take this scene to a whole new level of artistic. I can be sure this is intentional because of chapter 15 and the way this manga been drawn.

I have a theory that the Beniko in the story wrote the story like the last page of the chappter that make Sora go made and end up confessing to each other, and irl the main character get pussy out and hide her feeling for Kasumi make the story suddenly become crap like Sora said.
If you think about it it just like inception.

Glad I waited to read all 13 chapters at once.

Can't imagine enduring the pain you people did reading this slow burn.

Loved it :)

I did the exact same thing. I read chapter 1 and 2 as it came out and I immediately knew I would love this so I waited for around 7 months to pick it up again. It was completely worth it

I like waiting for these chapters to come out
The waits not agonizingly slow and everytime it releases I go, "Oh boy I get to expereince some really complicated feelings today!"

Yup that why i love this kind of slow burn story so much it make your emotion went on a roller coaster. And the time between it just make it better, it let you/viewer to sit back and think about the situation before moving pass that state.

But that would be too gross, so let's go with the space/time thing.

But gross i what Ucchi live for literally

Wow izumi try to block fujishiro from knowing that she are in love and using that shitty explains to have her way it fujishiro. Should have add nsfw and rape because of that :v

Where can I get a holy sword? Asking for a friend.

Where can I find this sword? Asking for myself.

@pendragonVMAX
Welp you just make me cry inside for letting me remember that song.

wait what! what happen with people die if they are killed.

Unless the author try to pull a "Madoka" on us.

It's the author of Idols Pretender we talking about.

But however you look at that it still end gay :v
Bruh you need to have high hope life is hard already don't need to make it sadder.

From the author's Twitter, it seems they do actually kiss eventually: https://twitter.com/kawai_roh/status/1119212939104276480

that a different manga.

Bruh, Marika wtf ? "Idk how i end up coming here but even if i go back to my world, i will come back to giveyou an answer and not guarantee it can be a yes" What the hell is that ? You don't even know how you come neither how to come back but you ask Lily to give you time for an answer and wait even if you go back to your world ? If i don't know she tell the truth, i swear i will had think she just dodge the question and never come back.

Cause you can see that Marika had only seen Lily as an importance friend and never considering a possibility that Lily in love with her so when all shit went down like that it kindda like a shock punch in her face, people need time to process that.
But you can see that see doesn't denial about a thought of having some feeling for Lily; just give it time for the love to grow. And even if she when back to her world the power of gayness will denial all the law of physic and some how let them be with each other again. Unless the author try to pull a "Madoka" on us.

Loving this bonus chapter. I wonder when will they have a child :3 ( science baby of course )

that competition is when the story go down hill for me, I was ok with other arc but some how i can not process this because it so goddamn unlogic that Momo won that competition; the manga didn't even show us how she can earn it. To be fair it should end that arc with Yun winning that. I thinks people start have doubt when they removed Kou but this arc just created a breakpoint that we can not handle anymore.

No don't cry Ucchi. I bet they just secretly go out to buy some present for Uchhi.

Asuka x Tomoko best ship along with Yuri x Tomoko, tysm for translating, I enjoyed this one a lot!

What are you guys smoking we all know that Ucchi x Kuroki is the OTP along with Pink x Kuro along with Yuri x Tomoko and The Mother x Kuroki

Welp, to limit the amount of damage this did to my heart I'll imagine that Honoka married Tsubasa and Kotori will fall for Umi and those two will get together at some point

I hope that too, everybody will be happy and go on their merry way. And the ending part where Kotori got the bouquet and stand next to Umi I thinks your theory maybe right.

Damn that is too low even lower than senpai.( but damn sensei is cute, hope she end up with Kou or Amene).

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/white_rose_week_2019#8

is this Keanu Reeves reference.

well my happy day just gone, thanks.

One hand I loyal to my NicoMaki OTP on other I really love NozoNico. And idk why but I cannot ship Eli with Nozo bur Eli whith Umi is ok in my book.