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sleekie posted:

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

I don't think it's the effect the author was going for, though I may be mistaken.

It's just the hentai trope where the characters have to describe everything they do, feel and see. "You clit is so cute", "your dick is so huge", "I can smell your juices", "oh, we are doing a 69", "I can feel my insides burning", "your breasts are so soft", "oh no, you can't do that, it' dirty", "It's so embarassing..." etc, etc.

When they have sex, most people, or even teenagers, don't talk that much. They act and feel. Words can and should be used to communicate with your partner, but not in that kind of logorrhea.

It's obvious Maruta is a hentai artist. The dialogues are porn fillers, because only moans for 10 pages wouldn't sell.

But... I love the way he draws and both characters are cute in their own way. So I dunno. Less sex and more cuddling and feelings would have been nice.

Exactly my thought. Noticing this was by Sir "Bait-and-Switch" Maruta I was extremely skeptical of this, but surprisingly it wasn't as bad as his other works. Unfortunately, even if you weren't aware of his previous works, this definitely gives off a cheap heterosexual "hentai" vibe (albeit, disregarding the first few pages of each chapter) solely due to the abhorrent dialogue. You honestly half-expect some dude to bulldoze himself in the infirmary and start fucking the girls left and right as he exclaims "deez lez pussi so tiht".

Although, I may be biased due to the fact that my standard for Lots of sex yuri is a bit higher in comparison to het smut. I started liking yuri in the first place due to the notion of it being the "purest form of love". Still, I'm not necessarily saying genuine het romance in sex-centered manga is impossible; it's just that in my experience it seems to be more uncommon or half-assedly thrown in for the sake of filler.

When I see artists such as Maruta apply their generic " SUPER!! fuckoo-festo doujin #69 " scheme to a potentially great short story such as this (nice art and sex scenes, interesting character designs), I'm always left disappointed.

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I'd like to blame my infrequent yuri consumption on my increasingly busy schedule IRL, but it's really because my poor heart can't handle this fluffy goodness on a daily or weekly basis. Morinaga should be charged with attempted murder for trying to induce a cardiac arrest upon his readers. God damn it, man.

Gordon
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OHHH SHIEEEEEEEEEEEEET

"To be continued..."

roundabout starts playing

Ah so nice to see another Jojo fans on this site

I'LL BE YOUR ROOOOUUUNNNNDABOUT

with the release of the English dub on AS, I predict a large influx of new Jojo fans surfacing us.

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Image Comments 20 Nov 15:13
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heh

Gordon
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nice art. shitty trope

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Image Comments 17 Nov 15:53
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Ohhh god, my heart.

I need to control my daily fluff intake before I die from overexposure of cuteness

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This one always gets me.

Honorable mention to everything by Bomber Grape, but this page is probably my favourite.

It's been so long since I've read this that I almost forgot about how wonderful it is.

Gordon
Image Comments 03 Oct 18:57
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kawaii as fug

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それは痛い!

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Great to see some new Chihagura. I'd like to see some ecchi-ness on Mokou's end, not just Kaguya's, but that's just my opinion.

This doujin is a few years old, but it's nice to read it again after a while.

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Image Comments 09 Sep 17:14
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Love the art style in this; minimalist, but it gets the point across clearly

Gordon
Opapagoto discussion 09 Sep 17:03
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Waifu x Husbando shenanigans will never be translated in your lifetime

Why even live (ಥ﹏ಥ)?

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meh...

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inb4 'this is totally me!'

Most of us can relate to some bits of her experience so far (the lack of self-esteem, feeling of hopelessness, etc.) it's nothing too unusual. However, her situation started to appear more seemingly fucked around the middle of the chapter.

The first few pages didn't really evoke much pity from me, but holy hell the self-harming and her baffling eating disorder(my god, page 15-19). If this really is an experience from the mangaka's life I have a CONSIDERABLE amount of sympathy for her. I hope she's doing well now.

Gordon
Image Comments 15 Aug 13:43
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@Phil maybe only Gensokyo 2hus die when they lose their hats?

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Image Comments 15 Aug 13:40
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where dat ass go (͡ ͡° ͜ つ ͡͡°)

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Image Comments 15 Aug 13:36
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The momentary sex scene bewildered me. I legit had to double-check if it was tagged NSFW before continuing to scroll down the comic and realizing it wasn't much lol. I'm not sure why, but the transition towards the next segment felt rushed at that point.

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This is a very strong contender for the What the fuck am I reading? tag, but it somehow manages to be entirely sensible in an entirely nonsensical way

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Image Comments 11 Aug 22:45
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It seems to be the shadow of the nose, otherwise it would be an extremely flat portrayal of one. I've seen some other work from this artist and he/she definitely doesn't draw his or her noses like that.

Gordon
Hanagui discussion 09 Aug 23:34
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I've personally never really liked most of Kaworu Watashiya's works, but I'll be damned if this isn't the cutest kiss I've seen in a mango yet.

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Ooooh that ended on a bad note. Can't wait for the sequel, though.

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PEG HAS SPOKEN

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If it's yuri, it's ok.


I have such a horrible double standard for yuri loli, man...most of the time.
I can't stand het loli one bit but I am enjoying the fuck out of this so far. I think it's mainly because the art is cute and gorgeous as well as both the girls are cute as hell.

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Good lord I just want some vanilla TsubaHonks it's been almost two years since I claimed they were my

My #1 pairing

at http://dynasty-scans.com/forum/topics/5537-honoka-x-tsubasa-discussion

GIVE ME MORE SWEET, FLUFFY TSUBASA HONKER DOUJINS FUCKING HELL I'm so DONE WITH CREEPY TSUBASA AND VICTIM HONK REEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Gordon
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http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/bloom_into_you_ch13#23

( ⚆ _ ⚆ ) that touko face tells it all