Some authors should hire some writing help. This development is beyond moronic.
Should have probably just been a cute love story about an OL and the stray she picked up (or forced herself on) like it was after the first chapter. Good thing this part only lasts for 4 chapters.
On the other hand it makes it stand out a bit instead of being the same old song and dance so it evens out i geuss.
Indeed. Nothing wrong with drama. Juxtaposing it with fluff makes it kind of interesting if only it were executed well.
This tension doesn't really feel earned. It just seems like it was thrown in there on a whim and it's also ending on a whim. Not like I want this to drag out but it didn't have the emotional impact a backstory of those extremes should have.
This reminds me of Kannazuki no Miko easly one of the worst things I have ever seen but himeko hard carried into being atleast decent. If we let that one get away with: shoehorned het, forced drama, giant random mech battles(seriously wtf) , time line bs, random drama arc, nonsenicall characters, rape, and being reborn as twins and still say it was good. I think we should forgive abit of a wonky misplaced drama arc but that is just my take on it.