Well that was...okay, yeah. I mean it was all well told and maybe a little overblown. That's not a bad thing, that's just how it is, and that's not what I have a problem with.
My problem is that it just kind of... ends. Like, here's ths big mystery of my past and your past, and hers me trying to get you to remember, and oh geeze I hope you remember this thing I told you about literally 10 minutes ago, and... Oh you remember now. Okay, done. The end.
In most stories the falling action would be a gradual slope that gives everyone a chance to absorb the events of tbe climax. Here it's just a steep cliff to the bottom.
It also feels like there's so much more to the story, but I guess remembering is enough shrug