"I love you, girl I met 14 seconds ago!"
14 seconds later
"Oh no, she is gone, how poignant our love was"
In all seriousness, I think the reason this doesn't work is that it seems to throw two girls together, they fall deeply in love instantly, fall asleep without a single additional line, and then have one girl immediately forget that girl to fall deeply in love with the next girl the instant she wakes up. And then she'll act all "alas, for time gone by and yet these feelings...!" when, for her, less than a minute of actual conscious time has passed. You JUST went to sleep, why are you suddenly all ephemeral and nostalgic?
Hell, warn the poor girl not to crawl into the coffin with you! Get out of that coffin! Get some ice cream with her or something! You know what happens when you both go to sleep, there's nothing stopping you from breaking this cycle except your weirdly sudden personality shift into Galadriel, somber mourner of fates too tragic to explain or prevent
last edited at Oct 29, 2018 12:22PM