I am all in on NicoMaki, so I kind of didn't want this to be good, or expect it to be. It was, though. One of the rare times I'll save something featuring a couple I don't ship.
The part about Homura's hair is actually really sweet, page 24 in particular is precious. Maitake's MadoHomu works are all really silly, but there is also an underlying sweetness that shines through sometimes. They're wonderful.