Kotoko-san needs a lesson from Handa-kun
Sorry, I'm just reading the manga rn and since I buy them irl they're like $15! I'll treasure them always though since they're funny
Mochida's thoughts on page 99 really bug me, since there's not really any indication that Kaori is particularly pining after Takagi in that scene, or even so far in that chapter. It's very much a "tell without showing" moment that really doesn't work for me. The rest of the chapter ticks along just fine and I like it, but that moment is definitely a low point for me.
I think she just knows her that well, besides she knew that Kaori had feelings for Takagi since the start
hmmm I'm not excited for after high school now because I still want that sweet nectar that comes from my friends....
wait, that came out wrong didn't it?
ah, she's gonna die one day because of her feelings,
but Momoka won't know unless she tells her,
we really need a sequel because I don't want to make up the ending myself
I think subtext is a ok description. While the other girls are falling for her, as far as I can tell, all she is doing so far is looking for a friend and is a clueless natural flirt. Funny, Ive seen this type before, just cannot recall from where.
All I can think of is a certain gigolette.
As for this story, I'm of the mind that it crossed the line from subtext to text. The main character simply suffers from a lack of reading comprehension.
oh god are you referencing Yuricam - Yurika no Campus Life ? because if you are, well nothing I guess lol
I hope future chapters explain why Shiro couldn't be the one with the artificial heart. It seems like the obvious choice a doctor would make in that situation.
im guessin bc the other chick does sports n shit n so a roboheart aint really good to have in that scenario?
Actually, doesn't Kuro (the black-haired girl) do sports, while Shiro (the fair-haired one) do the science stuff? The POV of the narration in his manga is slightly confusing. Shiro says she enjoys being able to do sports, but is then invited to the stage as an honor for a science report she had submitted.
I think black hair girl does science-- white hair girl does sports, she jus had some random report for stage of honor
It means because Kuro gave Shiro her heart, she can do sports and enjoys it now, but Shiro still does science and Kuro still does sports
Death threats? wouldn't give death threats for that, I mean a true ending is better than some made up one right? Sorry for being real here but, gay confessions irl probably don't go well like in manga, people these days are so brutal ('''-_-)
this author needs more yuri works. it is especially hard to find one shots with this much length, I actually prefer longer ones. anyway, I want more!!!