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sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

I'm going to give up on this one. I can't stand comic smokers.

Smoking isn't really used for comedy here though.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

... well this suddenly got boring, I don't care about any of this clothing stuff but it increasingly seems this is the main focus of this manga

the subtext tag is mocking us right now

... and I'm going to be honest with you, I don't think we even saw subtext yet :P

There isn't any so far.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Kinda sadge that the smell she associates with the teacher is cigarettes.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021
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This is just scummy bandman Bocchi shaking her down in a creative way.

sunspawn
Anemone discussion 25 Feb 02:10
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

When the discussion section has more action than the story. I didn't even read the oneshot, I got plenty of spice reading this thread.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Her job is to teach her 18+ things.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

"I sneezed at the wrong time"

This is a very good example of the author telling one thing and showing something else entirely.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

If you have attempt murder to keep your ship together, it ain't true

If you ain't willing to attempt murder to keep your ship together, are you really a fan?

This seems like the kind of conversation that requires a Nice Boat reference.

As a former Azur Lane player, all boats are nice, even the deranged ones, like Roon.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

If you have attempt murder to keep your ship together, it ain't true

If you ain't willing to attempt murder to keep your ship together, are you really a fan?

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Since we skipped a lot of the dithering, I predict (forgot long hair's name, so let's call her )Takane will just go for broke and blurt everything out next chapter.

sunspawn
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joined Jun 12, 2021

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

The title is really familiar though. And so are the contents.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

This is pretty cool so far, but yeah, that girl looks literally identical to Akebi from this author's other manga, which really throws me off because her personality is different :P

And the protag looks like the little sister with her hair cut short.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Oh man, dynasty forums doing the dynasty forums thing, how surprising...

So, is the implication that the head butler hired the shorty for personal reasons?

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

i feel like age gap stories get way too predictable when one of them is in high school. like oh you're going away for a few years to college and then it'll time skip to when you're a legal adult and you'll both embrace and it'll end on a teary "welcome home..!" i'm just getting tired of this lol.
thanks so much for translating though, i've been enjoying this one otherwise.

I totally agree with you. These are stories, we're reading them, we're age-gap fujoshis, the authors should realize it, LOL, most people who are uncomfortable with such romance won't be reading it, they should try and make characters and situations a bit more believable, or less predictable, I dunno. I don't know if everyone in this situation would take the moral high ground like we see too often of lying to themselves that it's platonic and friends and then only allowing themselves to see the truth once the younger partner is older. I mean sure some people must do that, but some must not as well.

But just like you, I like the story and I'm happy to be working on it! YW!

I think it's less a case of pandering to societal norms and more that Nagisa wants to be independent of his parents, so that he can do what he wants without getting the C-block from dad, who clearly seems to dislike Ai. Ai is part of it, but so is his desire to study art, which his father seems to be opposed to.

Basically, the author managed to avoid bad cliches so far, have a little bit of trust in her.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

The duality of man.

sunspawn
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Never too late to change your life, even in small details.

sunspawn
Omajinai discussion 26 Jan 21:33
Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Saki looks like she was drawn by Suzuki Senpai.

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joined Jun 12, 2021
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I doubt Bocchi knows something is wrong, more likely she is just being herself.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Am I the only one who notices that $1300 for a hotel laptop is insane? That kind of money would get you a gaming laptop with .5 terabyte SSD, i7-i9 processors, nvidia gtx 3050-3060, and 144 hz. Unless the hotel owner girl is actually a hard-core gamer, it would be pretty hard to find a regular laptop with that kind of pricing.

Gonna guess the author doesn't know much about computers and needed a random high number to drive the porn.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Rurika really went:
She complimented me, so I'm gonna ask her out.

Dating any% speedrun.

I mean, she probably also clued in to things from seeing her turn into a tomato whenever they talk.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Honestly, I kinda hope we don't get the "Aki being cowardly" part - she already had that phase and decided that Momo's happiness is more important to her. I can definitely see her deciding to refuse any attempts to separate them, so long as Momo doesn't want to.

And yeah, hope there would be no secret princess asspulls.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

And now we have her "biggest" fan that's probably going to try and bully poor Komugi and our little country girl just wants to be happy leave her alone smh.

With how this series is going so far, I wouldn't be surprised if it went the other way around and Komugi helped her see Rurika in a new light and she became theur friend too.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

I feel like the difference wilk be that Nomo doesn't really strike me as the type to say "yeah, sure" to an arranged marriage. At which point, should she say she does not want to part with Aki, it will be a question of whether the parents put her happiness or raison d'etat first.

I am not worried about a bad ending, this author has consistently been dodging the angst and heavy drama.

last edited at Jan 25, 2023 1:00PM

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

My question for all of this is

If Shiori killed Hinako's family and Miko knew damn well about it, why didn't she do anything, unless the "I HATE YUO MERMIAD" thing is a play and Miko also wanted Hinako's family dead

Idfk given there are at least two more volumes at work it's a doozy

How did you get to the conclusion that Shiori killed her family? If anything, it is likely that she saved her from dying.