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This mangaka has gone and done THE WORST FUCKING THING that they could do for me. The mangaka has decided an antagonist, who most likely will never have any kind of redemption arc or reason to care about in any way, a back story to explain why he does the shitty, horrible, dirtbag bullshit he does. NEWS FLASH WRITER: WE DON'T CARE! The character is an outright shitbag, and we don't want to story to focus on him AT ALL. Literally nothing he does will change our opinions of him at this point, and solidifying his shittyness with a backstory like this, will only lose you readers. NOTE TO FUTURE/CURRENT WRITERS: DON'T DO THIS. It is a complete waste of our time. I didn't finish this chapter, and will not be reading any more of this manga. The art is lovely, but the writing needs a lot of work.

lmfao what.

What other antagonists can we think of who were given back stories and depth to explain their awful choices actions, hmm: Voldemort, Thanos, Vader.. the fucking purple teddy bear from Toy Story lmfao. Where did you study to be telling people to avoid giving their antagonists depth?

People aren't suppose to like Tazune, we are explicitly made to dislike him. He sucks a lot and Battan did a good job making this feel as natural as possible. The story feels more realistic than other manga, every character has flaws and baggage and we can understand What they're thinking/feeling and I think its going to be a satisfying read.

Also, I don't think Battan will miss your readership, theres the door.

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Kanada

this tweet

Sometimes the comment section makes a story more endearing. Love it.

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For the next 40 years

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Liberty discussion 10 Feb 00:28
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And then we find that behind that mysterious, sexy facade is a badly damaged, immature narcissist looking for, and finding, a doormat to wipe her feet on.

As I've said before, if Maki were a sub discovering and getting off on her kink, that would be one thing--more power to her. But she just seems like she's too stupid and oblivious to realize that the proper response when somebody slaps you in the face is **not ** to apologize to them.

And its all Liz's fault!!!

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the raw power of a messy pony isn't something to mess around with nakano

greenette
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well that was a fast turnaround on the fuu-chan plot

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Secluded picnic in a maze, table set up and tea boiled
OH I JUST GOT HERE

greenette
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oh my god :(

greenette
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We are so lucky to have gotten 2 flashbacks that reestablish how shitty each character is.

We are truly blessed.

greenette
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oh yay a flashback chapter, these are my favorite

greenette
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WARNING, the end is R18.

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Nice

greenette
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The reason this gets less comments and attention is you can't just drop a 'this is so cute omfg' type comment. This story delivers quite well in all the important areas and more than anything doesn't seem to bait us with drama which also feeds into the lack of comments.

Its an all around wonderful story and I really hope we get to see it through to the end.

greenette
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To subvert us all off the face of the planet we could get a timeskip ending.

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1 x ½ discussion 15 Dec 23:22
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Did.... did they just imply that happened to Ayako

That's my impression too :(

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yes

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1 x ½ discussion 23 Jun 02:05
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So when are we getting to the lewds?

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oh no

why are all the good stories a one way ticket to drama town

greenette
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I hope they do something silly only for it to turn serious

AND THEN THEY KISS PLS

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I've seen everything now

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awww yeah

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yes

greenette
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Hello, Im super new to the forums and don't know where to post this, and I cant seem to find an FAQ lol.

Is there an IM function on this site?