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Pyoro
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I hadn't expected this to turn into an "old lady collects a harem by random acts of being motherly" story o_O

Pyoro
Stretch discussion 14 Jul 07:47
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

It just annoyed me that the end didn't resolve anything after teasing all sorts of complex backstories and developments. The "yuribait" part ... meeh, it's not one of those criminal "bait and switch" cases, so it didn't be bother me that much ^^

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

If he's working one of their messed up crunch jobs sleeping basically all day on a day off doesn't sound too crazy. When you spent all week working until midnight or so you have to catch up on sleep at some point ^^;

Pyoro
1 x ½ discussion 13 Jul 17:20
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

But at least on the information we have to go by at the moment, the depiction of senpai as some sort of predatory child-abuser is not supported by the present evidence. Miyuki is what, two years older than Asuka? And Asuka has known her longer than she’s been friends with Jun and his family—she was shy Asuka’s first peer-mentor/protector.

? Maybe I'm too tired and misunderstand something, but Asuka basically grew up with Jun's family. She's just "temporarily" on a forced break "to develop independence" from them in the current-flashback-timeline as Rui pushed her away a bit.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

More like "sub"text, am I rite ...

Pyoro
1 x ½ discussion 12 Jul 12:48
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Jun-nii so far off the romantic radar he might as well go live on the moon.

Pyoro
Image Comments 11 Jul 07:53
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017
Miniskirt

I never got how anyone liked it, but whatever. I'll just post my contrary opinion and say it's not worth wasting even five minutes on.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

It's just classic Chekhov's Gun; come on, basically all stories follow this advise. Unless the author simply brought it up to explain why they don't have children, in case a Japanese readers might feel it strange that a woman in her 30's doesn't have kids, there's no reason to mention them.

But I don't buy that's enough of a reason, so she'll probably accidentally get pregnant; or at least it'll be a major explanation why she got married in the first place, or why she can't be with a woman, or whatever.

I'd be really surprised if this was the only time in the plot kids came up after making such a big deal out of it (talking with the mother-in-law, talking with the husband; and of course also the ex with her kid...)

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

This talk about kids is very suspicious. Let me guess: now it will actually happen. At the most inconvenient of moments.

Pyoro
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I'd be infinitely amused if Koguma woke up next chapter and it'd turn out that Hina after all wasn't able to resist and had done unspeakable lewd things(tm) to her in her sleep.

"Unspeakable lewd things"

Like what?

All of them, naturally. The chapter would begin with a panel of Koguma contently waking up, then zooming out, showing that she's somehow undressed and has bite and rope marks all over her body, before further zooming out to show her room with sex toys and camera/sound recording equipments and various other costumes and props strewn about. Then a panel of a satisfied Hina coming back fresh from a shower, only wearing a towel.

Then Koguma does her usual "Hina-sana baka!" thing and everyone has a good chuckle about it.

Pyoro
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I'd be infinitely amused if Koguma woke up next chapter and it'd turn out that Hina after all wasn't able to resist and had done unspeakable lewd things(tm) to her in her sleep.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

It mostly reminds me of the typical H story, except the author just barely managed to stop themselves before sliding into the obligatory rape-like sex scene ...

So it's all good. Quite cute.

Pyoro
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

... or every time there's some violence you get those pixelation effects ^^

Pyoro
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Do I see anatomical problems here? I can't see how the thigh can get that way, unless her leg is broken.

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/beloved_paintings_ch02#9

Check out p13 with the painting explanation? Presumably this is intentional to copy the "problems" of the painting this is based on.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Let's just say it's suspicious that this sort of philosophical stance comes up all the time with queer relationships but never with hetero content. You might start to believe that queer-erasure and queer-baiting is actually a thing ^^

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

It's strange that is noted that Mari is female. Why in a women world you would note that someone is female ?

This might have been the profile of the parallel universe Mari; as in "her counter-part is female" (unlike others who are gender bent).

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I'm beginning to develop an unreasonable hatred of strawberries.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Ya, absolutely the same thoughts I had. X seemed like the typical goofy leader (think Vamp Shougun) and now she seems to be more like a dangerous Joker-type antagonist.

But I suspect she ultimately still has some sort of stupid goal ^^

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

The entire "point" of abusive relationships is that the abuser is practically never "just" a messed up psychopath who only 24/7 physically and emotionally abuses their partner. The very "mechanism" of abusive relationships include that they are also sometimes caring and apologetic for their behavior, along with promising to not do it again and so on and so forth.

His gesture is literally meaningless. It excuses nothing, as has been said, but it also means nothing.

People have to understand that genuinely loving someone is not contradicting to also genuinely abusing the same person. If it's abuse, it's abuse. Get the fuck away before you end up as a corpse.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Kill that guy. It's the only solution.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

A little bit of a rough release? Chapter 1 has some text bubbles that weren't cleaned up, and there's a bunch of lines that are grammatically wrong or otherwise odd.

Nice story though. Little bit cliché with the sleepover, but whatever.

Pyoro
Saki discussion 05 Jul 06:13
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Going back to chapter 1 made me remember how Saki seemed to have a bit of a crush on Kyoutaro back the. That's interesting. Although he belongs to Yuuki now.

A lot has changed since the beginning of the manga, but I really don't see that. He just treats her like a convenient friend to have around and she kinda tags along in her usual nervous and awkward self, but I can't say I saw anything that'd pass as "romantic tension" for me ^^;

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

All chapters without that pointless token male character are to be applauded.

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Ah, my kokoro. Very kawaii.

Pyoro
1 x ½ discussion 04 Jul 11:17
Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Yes, but those aren't funny, so they don't count as humor.

ducks and runs