Stuck at the office, doing overtime while eating chips, drinking unhealthy amounts of canned coffee, reading doujin and manga on DR. ...Hold on, what was I working on again? owo;
Thanks, though for the first one I can't read it xD
P1:
Title: Can't get outta the bed the first day in the new year. (<- Argot)
P2:
IA: (Pant, pant)
Yukali: (Kiss, pant)
IA&Yukali: (Pant)
Yukali: ... The new year bell rang. Happy new year.
IA: Y-yeah, same to you.
Yukali: Now, Miss IA~
P3:
Yukali: Do you think it's OK for us to move on to your first time?
IA: !?
Yukali: Ah, I'm just telling it. You don't have the right to disagree.
Yukali: Hey, IA.
IA: (Startle) Yu-Yukali...?
Yukali: (Kiss)
IA: Eh, wai-
Yukali: I like you. I love you. I LOVE YOU THE MOST IN THIS WHOLE WORLD.
Yukali: I'll never ever-
IA: A-ah...
Yukali: Let go of you.
IA: (Pant)
* Happy new year! Luminous `IA x Yukali` this year as well! *
This was a really interesting challenge to translate. I've not had much experience with long-form translation in quite a while, and then I wanted to keep the 'children's book' feel to the language as well...
How'd I do, d'ya think?
I'd throw away all the "-chan"'s. And replace Lin's "Nya" w/ "Meow".
I don't know about anyone else, but Sekihara's sex scenes are very one sided and I'm not sure if I like that. I feel like most of the stuff I've read are always like one character gets the other one off and then it's either over right there or the one who didn't get off will go off and masturbate. The art is nice and all but that's one thing I don't think I'll ever get over.
It's because you haven't read his "Garden of Morality".
"I'm too embarrassed to be living in the same world with such an idiot like you, so don't you talk to me. I don't know you." <- What the left-side girl thinks.