For some reason, I think this whole setting and especially how the two of them interacted, would have fit a story about Eri x Nozomi better.
I felt like Eri acted a little out of character, making me believe that if the roles switched from the Eri in this doujin to Nozomi and Umi to the "usual" Eri, it would have been better.

Well, I liked it nonetheless, but I still felt like saying that.

I think it's because author is not using characters from anime, probably from manag cause from what I heard, some of them act very different there.

Mhhh...I see they interaction is different than in the anime
maybe is based in other sauce material

I think it's based on manga

One of a better doujins I've seen with these two. Can't believe I missed it's release.

Would be great to see translation for Kanbayashi Makoto doujinshi like Make Out and the one before it, 3-4 doujinshi following one story.

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There are tons of pretend friends, especially if you are rich and famous. Pretty sure Yuji was an ass for most part. She was jealous.

[shipping wars stuff removed - I already said I'd be doing this to all sides]

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Sumireko taking care of Banba?

These ship really does sail itself. There better be some after scenes with them later on.

Am really happy to see these two brought back to life. But new doujin would be more than welcomed that's for sure^^

@BiohunterX
Oh yes, hoping for proper relationship exploration. Hope they won't just be together at the start, I wanna see actual hook up since for me ending was just a symbolic representation for future, it lacked romantic build up te be out right dating.

@PaleRider
Feel yah. For one I just hate Korra in first 2 seasons. One of the most selfish and idiotic MCs I ever met, especially in season 1. Don't even get me started on dumb love triangle -_-
While I feel bad for shit that happened to Korra in season 3 and end of season 2, it was extremely beneficial for her. She finally started to use brain.

Lightning was extremely under used. Mako shot Amon from face to face distance and he got up and kicked their asses again. Blood bending or not, that was pathetic considering that Amon was defenceless and unprepared. Not to mention that Azula killed Aang with it while standing far away. Talk about degradation.

@Nevri
Do not worship it but LoK does not even hold a candle to ATLA. Azula and Zuko, and whole Fire family dynamic alone, are 100 times better than everything that LoK had offered. Non of Lok battles even come close to Azula's and Zuko's showdown, not even close to Aang and Ozai's battle. So yeh I'll leave it at that too or I can keep this up for hours.

@AsukaEnergetic
LoK story line lasted over 3-4 years and each season focused on different things, ATLA on the other hand had one main story that lasted several months, maybe a year. However, while LoK had tons of themes, non was properly developed and characters and story suffered from it. ATLA had one but explored it from every direction and flashed out every main and important character.

But yeh don't wanna turn it into flaming thread either, I just had to list those things to explain where I stand. I'll try not to say anything else on this topic here.

Besides I like the art =)

@Nevri
You must be joking... ATLA is 10 times better than LoK. Better characters, better story, better chemistry, stronger bending and just better over all.

Apart from few scenes LoK was bad, season 3 is the only one I don't mind re-watching. Love triangle was painful, main group had no real connection, sloppy story, weaker bending and etc.
Better animation but that's honestly the only thing I can praise it for.

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I haven't been on this thread for a while but what a blessing to be greeted with so many amazing fan art =D

I feel yah. If not Yuzu/Mei she could at least properly develop the ones we already have.

Looks nothing like Mei to me, Mei has sharper face. This girl has round face

http://s22.postimg.org/5t1kwgqb5/nope.jpg

Wait wait wait, is that another new character at the end of the chapter? AGAIN?!

For fucks sake if this girl gets in the way too I will freaking rage. Author seriously needs to work on her imagination. The only saving grace for this manga is art work right now, nothing more.

I thought it was obvious that she is sitting on her lap going by position and closeness.

It actually is. One of the raw chapters has a content very close to this art work so we might as well get more explicit stuff later =P

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YuriShu12
She is actually big fan of Maki/Umi, tons of great art with them.

YuriSenpai
Trust me, you are not alone. I can ship Nozomi with almost anyone but I just can't see Eri with anyone else even in AU world where Nozomi ends with someone else and I know it's illogical and unfair XD

I wouldn't call it strange considering that people ship their mothers together.

@ari-chan
As you said, subtext, KyoAni lives on subtext. It knows that gay sells so it creates bunch of subtext, earns money and then throws it out of the window without ever crossing the finish line.

@Shira
MakiUmi is quiet popular recently with some great art work. MakiNozomi and MakiEri pop up quiet often too. And with Maki/Kotori moms being old friends, this ship tends to pop up too.

Those pics were distracting. Couldn't get pass page 4... even if they are hilariouse

I'm all up for AUs and changes but as long as there is valid reason that explains the change. Gender bend? Fine, alternative universe. If Honoka was actual male here (gender bend) I wouldn't have a problem here even if it's not my thing either. Not into gender bend thing.

However, I hate unreasonable changes like for example Honoka being turned into a miserable asshole or other personality changes that are not backed uped by anything. You are erasing them and being lazy because you can't think of your own character looks. That's not being creative.

If I am told that Honoka had rough childhood, grew up in orphanage and etc, then yes I accept this change because it is a what if setting. If there is no back story or explanation, that's laziness.

Futa is laziness. Remove Futa warning tag and you get "Hey I'm your fave Honka but I have a surprise... I have dick!" Like what did I miss?

I'll never understand peoples' fascination with Futa... the whole point of yuri is that both of them have vaginas. If I want to see a dick action, I'll check yaoi or hetero.

Please stop adding dicks to characters that are not meant to have them. Besides why is it always girls with dicks? Where are guys with vaginas? I am yet to find one, not that either of them interests me. Honestly, what's the point of saying you like yuri when you are still turning one of them into a half male when neither of characters is meant to be one?

This was a nice read but would've been 100 times better without futa.

Please no, I'm kinda fed up with shock reveals. No-Rae already had one, no need for another realization drama.

Aaannndddd... the chapter is out! With all those flashbacks at the end it seems like Seol-a is finally onto something.