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XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

I still find it really fucked up and disgusting that the only way she will feel closer with Rika is if she makes porn with the men that fucked her Crush……..yaikes!

last edited at Jan 7, 2024 5:28AM

joined May 3, 2014

the "plot" adds a lot of unintentional comedy

it adds garbage, wasn’t funny since this is an hentai any way, it took from the what was supposed to be hot sex but the author needed to add some weird “we are eating cake with friends while we toe fuck one another”

joined May 3, 2014

Ending feels rushed and cold, which is a different vibe from the rest of the series. Something I like about this author is that they're able to make soft, fluffy relationships even from an aroace perspective, but this felt off. Was the series cancelled and cut short or something?

I disagree, I thought the ending was very fitting. But regardless of that, how was this series aro? When the characters are have explicitly expressed that they are in love?

Way late seeing this, but you don't seem to know what aromantic is? It doesn't mean two (or more) people can't love each other if they're on the aro-spectrum. It means they don't do the whole typical romance thing, or take some things but leave some things. The relationship in this series and Crescent Moon and Doughnuts is clearly queerplatonic-ish at least.

yeah, your right with the way the relationship has been in this manga it does remind me of Crescent Moon and Doughnuts, tho i don’t like Crescent Moon, i didn’t even finish it once i found out it’s aro since I’m not relating at all with the whole we are best friends +2, without full blown romance it just doesn’t click with me

now that i think about it there are quite a lot of yuri mangas that are quite thin on the romance aspect! either the author didn’t wanna go full blown to show the relationship or they did the whole” we are together at the end” so that’s way i will avoid the whole aro thingy if there is a story like that

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

i wish there was more! like another chapter were they are together!!!

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

some yuri fans are a type of masochist that SOMEHOW enjoy subtext! i won’t ever be able to endure this type of torture for 70 chapters

last edited at Dec 31, 2023 9:28AM

joined May 3, 2014

the only good thing from this author is reading the comments here every so often! i do wander way does the author loves to write garbage humans and NTR so much, the only thing i think is because it’s fiction so/or the author might have an fetish for garbage women.

joined May 3, 2014

Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

so the story wasn’t bad for a first chapter, but you needed to day some bad about the story anyway! the majority of the Yuri stories aren’t “groundbreaking” in the LEAST, do you remind every one that every time you read a story?

it will had been something else if some one was praising the story to hell and back so you can remind them this ain’t “groundbreaking”

joined May 3, 2014

ah i remember way this part of the story rubs me really bad in the wrong way, i really hate this part because we are talking about Mira here were they can’t do good story so they should stick to hentai cuz up untill now none of their supposed “romance” stories were well written in terms of characters and plot.

Also this topic were Lesbians has to pretebd to be straight makes my blood boil, this part of the story is written like shit, i did read stories with parts like this, and i understand them! not like it never happen, but for fuks sakes! Mira blows ass on this part of the story

joined May 3, 2014

ah i remember way this part of the story rubs me really bad in the wrong way, i really hate this part because we are talking about Mira here were they can’t do good story so they should stick to hentai cuz up untill now none of their supposed “romance” stories were well written in terms of characters and plot.

Also this topic were Lesbians has to pretebd to be straight makes my blood boil, this part of the story is written like shit, i did read stories with parts like this, and i understand them! not like it never happen, but for fuks sakes! Mira blows ass on this part of the story

joined May 3, 2014

The Tags are kinda confusing is it a more of a yuri or het love triangle? or equal possibility? I'll find out on my own

I would say it's more het since she makes out with the dude in almost every chapter. lol

Overall, what I feel about this manga is that it's interesting as a regular manga but somewhat disappointing as a yuri manga. I think when it comes to storytelling, the "journey" is as important as the "destination". If 80-90% of the "journey" is het stuff, I'd feel I wasted my time reading it regardless of how it ends.

80% is not het stuff. We're at chapter 5 out of 110 and still going strong. It's a story that has a point and is developing, and allowing it's characters to develop and deal with their complicated issues. That's all. We haven't even met the vast majority of it's characters yet or it's other couples. It just started. Your criticizing the "journey" when you just took one step out of the front door.

I actually read ahead up to around chapter 20 though, and my opinion is valid at least to that point.

Of course there are many more chapters but I think 20 chapters is more than enough to get a sense of what kind of story it is.

Wait a moment, please spoil me ! I really wanna know if i should wait until at least 20 chapters while only reading comments to get a feeling if the manga is worth investing in it!,

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

For for thous that think Junko “won” or that she is not aware of her delusion of what actually she “won”

the last 3 pages shows she is doubting she “won” by not smiling at all when the people in the darkness offers her the hand to join then, it kinda indicates she is slowly realizing she didn’t actually “win”, while Junko takes that hand and joins the others into the darkness and her character completely disappeared in the darkness it does not foreshadow an good ending for Junko down this path she chose XD

last edited at Dec 24, 2023 1:43PM

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

I love this ending. Junko won! The "villainess" won. But it's the definition of a hollow victory. Kayo found a different game to play, one that she's much happier playing, one that simply matters more, while Junko is stuck on the corporate grind.

The spread of Kayo walking away from Junko is fantastic. Kayo walking towards the flowers, nature, in harmony with herself and her environment. Junko being left in the dark, under the bridge, in the constructions and schemes of the career she's chosen. Junko got everything she wanted, yet Kayo is still happier. It's the perfect comeuppance.

yoo i did notice the darkness vs Light but didn’t notice the flowers and nature being in harmony with yourself plus light is warm vs the bridge were is dark and cold as concret is an an selfmade hell too! were the only people there are the ones that can backstab you at any time

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

I feel like Kayo’s “victory” is a little undercut by how much it involves nepotism. Even if she genuinely loves Satomi, just having a rich sugar mommy give you the win because you’re sleeping with her feels a little cheap from a story perspective. It would be like suddenly winning a huge lottery so you don’t have to work anymore. Anyone could win at life if a rich person in a powerful position suddenly fell in love with you and started giving you treats.

oh my god people give me a bloody break! what part of the corpo ladder looks like an honor to be had? talking as if getting hired in a position you deserve is nepotism LOOL give me a break! Kayo deserves it and is competent and fit for the job! so way in bloody effing hell won’t she get the job? if she can avoid the shity schemes of the disgusting employs that only look to torn you apparat in an sadistic way, AND finally realizing she can have an better and more fulfilling life that an corpo position WAY are you pretending that ain’t worth it?

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

Way do i have a feeling Aya will willingly breakup with Koto so she can be with Erika?(making the title of the manga becoming true) but that makes no sense, in 7 years are you telling me Koto never though of Erika in an romantic sense? so what makes Erika so sure that after Aya comes back Koto can some how get over her and be with Erika?….unless Koto already has feelings for Erika but can’t be with her becaue of Aya gone missing, so now she can be with her after getting some closure?

Another thing is the dumb Erika thinking she can be with Koto after she breaks up with Aya, like I said, unless Koto has some feelings with Erika what makes her so god damn sure Koto will chose her? and not start falling in love with some one else!

there is something more going on between Erika and Koto but the Erika bitch only cares about getting in between Koto legs LOOL so she ain’t telling Aya anything! like that comment about Koto changing and going in the right direction? clearly the outcome Erika wishes which is way she pushed Koto to talk with Aya in the first chapters, in hopes of Koto starting to move on faster from Aya…..the more i think about it the more i think Aya will end up brokenhearted T^T

last edited at Dec 24, 2023 12:01PM

joined May 3, 2014

i'm becoming too jaded to mary sues, even the gayness is somehow not satisfying when capital-L Ladies are throwing themselves all over the protagonist at first sight

true, i will give it 3 more chapters before i drop it if the story continues like this

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

oh this one, I thought I already read it on dynasty. Suppose I got confused because it's been on mangadex for a while and I really loved it.

Not much to say really that the four before me haven't said already. It's a sad one, and it really nails the emotional core. If you're on the fence, read it, it's good.

it’s good at making you feel heartbroken and really sad :/

XadarxBlack
Chandelier discussion 23 Dec 05:26
joined May 3, 2014

the plot lost me with the whole porn actress and the prostitute PLUS the seriousness of the suicide for the most weird reasons.

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

I just binged all of this and caught up. I skipped school to read this. I honestly don’t understand the Shiho hate, yes she was a bitch and her redemption wasn’t like zuko or anything. She was shown to be impulsive, self sabotaging, and pretty rude however it’s very like her to quit a band for something like that. She fell HARD she couldn’t just move on, and as mizuguchi said, her feelings were falling out even though she tried to hide them. Shiho was ready to fully move on because their relationship wasn’t healthy. Somehow they fixed it and I think they’re cute.

Shiho had the kind of typical I’m not number one so I quit kind of thing, I think it mostly because of the high standard she held herself because she’d been playing for so long. But that is a stark contrast to why she quit ss, it wasn’t her typical bitchiness, it still was in a way, but it wasn’t because of how high her self standards are, it was because she knew she couldn’t come between yori and mizuguchi.
She couldn’t be number one FOR SOMEONE ELSE. Usually she wants to be the best for herself, because that’s what she expected of herself. But after honestly I forgot her name’s death, she started trying for her, but obviously not in the same way. She felt a debt to her for being mean for stupid reasons. But with mizuguchi she just wanted love, I wouldn’t say she’s traumatized, but she has regrets, who doesn’t? ALSO our mc’s got together in like chapter 5, don’t get me wrong I love them they’re adorable, but the big arc is about Shiho and mizuguchi reconciling, the last few volumes have mostly been about their weird beef. From the moment I saw them, I knew Shiho liked her, I’ve done something similar to that before, I didn’t antagonize them or anything but I do get the initial quitting. She was in the wrong for that but she recognized that and made up.
She was annoying but this is her story too.

Anyways tachibana and ma Chan give me life.

an Shiho apologist? not the first time people see that part of the story in red tinted glasses, this was boring as hell to read about such an unlikeable character, hope the story just ends and we are done because i REALLY don’t care about Shiho being forgiven sooo god damn fast as the supposed “romance” about her and that character is even faster 0.0 like are we gonna spend MORE chapters about their romance now? ugh

last edited at Dec 23, 2023 5:08AM

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

damn, now we need to wait a month for the next chapter!

joined May 3, 2014

sorry but the artwork is so bad i can’t even understand what’s going on let alone figure out the way to read the chapters >.>

XadarxBlack
telomereNA discussion 20 Dec 22:08
joined May 3, 2014

Pixiv contains lots of het.

i was about to say were is the het? but then i realize i wasn’t log in my Pixiv account >.> yeap my mistake!

now i need some yuri to wash the het corruption form my eyes before it rots away!

joined May 3, 2014

This is was a really nice and quick read, but I do wish there's a part two that kinda shows more of their new relationship. (Because, Sasakawa is clearly a people-pleaser / needs validation from others, so it'd be nice to see her stand up for herself / have the author show she's not just using (not necessarily maliciously) Maki for the validation.)

the reason she is soo people pleasing is because she can read thoughts! that ability for many people can end up like our MC were she hates hearing negative things being told over and over! given the fact negative thought affect you WAY WORST

joined May 3, 2014

Hold on, they're really brushing past the bit where she installed a needle inside the vagina of a sex bot. That seems like an accident waiting to happen.

i think it will be a one time thing only!

XadarxBlack
joined May 3, 2014

Don't tell me it's going to be foursome thing...

that will suck really bad, well time to get into reading the comments first before i ever read a new chapter, and will wait untill this story is over

the way this story is going the maids in the end the end might as well be sex salves cuz every one can do everything to them :/

also the romance tag ain’t there so i think we might have some werdo ending that is some poor form of poly/orgy? sexual relation? :c

last edited at Dec 16, 2023 5:11AM

joined May 3, 2014

Not only did the ending arc suck, but the last chapter was especially bad. All that heaven nonsense was total bullshit. Such a cute beginning too. What a disappointment.

i disagree, yes the Haven part was really weird to say the least, but the story wasn’t much of a disappointment since from the beginning it was all nonsensical type of story