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EvilDevil
Yurushiki discussion 04 Jun 12:37
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Couple of missing bits of dialogue people should be aware of til the typesetter fixes them

p9 Let's take a commemorative: Let's take a commemorative photo!

p12 That surprised me... (goes in small text): How did you get here so quickly?

p13 Yui-chan really is kind... but a meteorite?: Goes in Yukari's bubble ("What's she talking about?" in small text in the bubble)

SOME errors were fixed

https://exhentai.org/g/1071098/e0a4289730/

last edited at Jun 4, 2017 12:53PM

EvilDevil
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EvilDevil
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Yuzumori-san Ch. 18.1
error in pg 7 fixed http://www.mediafire.com/file/ztgytqn6u23f35r/Chapter+18.1.zip

EvilDevil
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I'll Give All My Songs To You has an error in pg 12, it was fixed https://exhentai.org/s/29b5fd2853/1069236-12

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

error in pg 12, "you can get as much as your heart's desire!" is said twice. I checked the raws and I think what Tsubasa says is different.

error was fixed https://exhentai.org/s/29b5fd2853/1069236-12

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

Natsuki Ijiri had errors

pg 10, "staistics" should be "statistics.
pg 11, "durng lunchtime" should be "during".
pg 15, "melencholy" should be "melancholy".
pg 20, "hert" I think that's "hurt"?

they had been fixed

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 10, "staistics" should be "statistics.
pg 11, "durng lunchtime" should be "during".
pg 15, "melencholy" should be "melancholy".
pg 20, "hert" I think that's "hurt"?

errors were fixed

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

With an Earnest Love

pg 04, “I’ve thought that I should I hurry up and end it.” I think it should be “that I should hurry” not “that I should I hurry”.

error was fixed https://yuriproject.net/with-an-earnest-love/

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

Blueprints for a Girl

pg 08, “my being pretty had nothing do” should be “nothing to do”.

error was fixed https://yuriproject.net/blueprints-girl-ch01/

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 04, “I’ve thought that I should I hurry up and end it.” I think it should be “that I should hurry” not “that I should I hurry”.

error was fixed https://yuriproject.net/with-an-earnest-love/

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 08, “my being pretty had nothing do” should be “nothing to do”.

error was fixed https://yuriproject.net/blueprints-girl-ch01/

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

error in pg 12, "you can get as much as your heart's desire!" is said twice. I checked the raws and I think what Tsubasa says is different.

EvilDevil
EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 10, "staistics" should be "statistics.
pg 11, "durng lunchtime" should be "during".
pg 15, "melencholy" should be "melancholy".
pg 20, "hert" I think that's "hurt"?

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

Mami-San's Magic

pg 1, "When I first become" should be "became"
pg 3, "unsuited to being magical girl." sounds better as "unsuited to being a magical girl", missing "a".

errors fixed http://imgur.com/a/6o88N

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 1, "When I first become" should be "became"

pg 3, "unsuited to being magical girl." sounds better as "unsuited to being a magical girl", missing "a".

errors fixed http://imgur.com/a/6o88N

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

404: Men not found tags.

No, there is just that 1% left. Probably Hiding somewhere.

On another note: 99% of the worlds population are female and science takes a big leap and homosexuality is no problem anymore? Hell yeah. Sounds like a good plan to me!

Fully Automated Luxury Yuri Communism™

last edited at May 27, 2017 10:17PM

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 1, "When I first become" should be "became"

pg 3, "unsuited to being magical girl." sounds better as "unsuited to being a magical girl", missing "a".

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

I dont understand her logic...