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I never knew lots more chapters were made for this that are not on here- were they translated and put up anywhere?
Had the 2 leads got together by then?

Its such a huge shame what happened :( but if there is a lot more i can read i'd like to.

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Inversion discussion 12 Oct 15:22
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So obviously not much story here- and normally i profer cleaner art styles- but i really do like this art style- its really good.

elevown
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^I know this- but the mangaka doesnt seem to since they wrote they did.

@Blastaar yeah possibly- but that isnt Mel talking it seems to be a side comment / explanation by the author not a character. I was wonder if the origional could be read more as 'it tastes like honey'. Maybe nectar tastes like honey?

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elevown
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That was cute.

But since when do flowers have honey in them?

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^Trigrams are 3 long sequences of words or word parts used in linguistics for something or other - I think to do with like writing a natural language parser ? maybe shes super good at languages ? No idea why there are 8 - Thats the best i got lol.

last edited at Oct 9, 2021 8:17PM

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^Yup i noticed and assumed it was another inconsistancy but too minor to bring up on top of the others - it might well be a plot point tho - maybe the other girl will find it.

p.s @kenkyokitsune - ch1 page 4 a bit futher down just after the nurse says 'if nothing happens then you can go back'
there is a strange white bar chopping off the top of the image below- it doesnt seem to be intentional funky layout either since it has no border but I might be wrong.?

It looks like if you cut the white strip out the top part will fit onto the top of the image below.

last edited at Oct 9, 2021 9:56AM

elevown
Image Comments 09 Oct 07:47
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@sighoflethe you're talking about killing slimes for 300 yr right not otherside? In that case I'm off to find it and buy v1 :)

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Image Comments 09 Oct 01:09
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^I enjoyed the anime even tho it was pretty low budget- it was wholesome fun and i enjoyed the characters- how's the LN compare to the anime? And have they been translated?

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Super sweet! And that was a very clever way to get a kiss after the girl deliberately threw lol.

last edited at Oct 8, 2021 7:51PM

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^Thanks for taking the trouble

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Anyone notice in the middle of page 4 ch2, Gu switches chairs for 1 small panel then pops back- im assuming thats a consistancy mistake not that they swapped chairs then back for no decernable reason?

Also in the last panel of p5 of chapter 2 Gu has no legs lol. So while I love the art, the artist could do with paying a bit more attention to stuff like that.

p.s Also in chapter 1 p4, the first pannels - the overlapping hospital scenes- both are strangely cropped like they were cut and pasted wrong- that might be deliberate but if it was i'd expect black lines between them like the example at the end of the chapter. Or is this maybe something to do with how its been stiched together?

last edited at Oct 8, 2021 4:34PM

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^Yeah but they dont know that the other girl is also into them- it might drag out them both being into each other and somehow not realising its mutual for 20+ chapters lol- in place of the usual not knowing their own feelings cliche.

I hope not though. It would be nice to see one of these stories quickly move onto the flirting and datiing stages.

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This was a really sweet start- and I LOVE the art :)

I think its a bit of a mistake to have both main characters with such similar hair styles and colours but that aside I really wanna read more of this :)

@ozzy Since her name is Gu yushi Im guessing gugu is her nickname for her? Or perhaps her nickname in class.

Even tho its the first time they talked we see at the end they are both interested in each other so she has probably been refering to her by that nickname in her head or heard classmates say it and it just slipped out.

last edited at Oct 8, 2021 8:47AM

elevown
Only I Know discussion 08 Oct 08:33
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I totally love Kyouko x Sayaka when its done right like this, and not totally spoiled by this series' obession with childish angst and 'we all died and are living in a dream' nonsense.

last edited at Oct 8, 2021 8:34AM

elevown
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Nice and laid back yet ero comic - and a rather unique graphics style too.

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Very nice start and interesting set up.

~Im suprised stuff like this can even still get made in China though given its huge crackdown on all things gay.

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^^Half its features are locked because she wont register herself as its owner. presumably you would. Im sure it can wake itself when fully activated.

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^Its not for moral reasons- she hadnt ever even kissed someone before- so its just despite her age she is pretty innocent/shy.

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YOU motivated your older sister so take responsibility for it lol.

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Image Comments 05 Oct 08:43
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Someone is jelous lol.

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@ Plasmy She might of been afterward depending how self concious and embaressed Remi got lol.

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So CUUUTE!

Only Meiling could get away with that lol.

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Image Comments 01 Oct 23:23
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White wings?

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Image Comments 30 Sep 20:41
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^Yup i thought we were having a play on that senario. Its a shame she never took that advice!

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I dont really see it as yuri. Not that all stories have to be - just mean i wouldnt tag it as such personally.
I enjoyed this series though I still woulda appreciated it more if they had actually become a couple too.