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Better ending: they put the painting in the third story girl's bathroom.

Wouldn't that be creepy for bathroom goers?

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

Is that a kindred spirits reference? I wonder if there are any other yuri schoolgirl ghost stories...

Yes, it is.

I don't think there are any other stories where both sides are ghosts except for our kindred spirits on the roof.

EDIT:

Found one:
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/the_broom_and_the_banana_peel

last edited at Aug 27, 2017 6:38AM

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

This looks like a good starting plot for a VN:

Oto and Hanako are ghost girls that are finally together. However, they can't move on to the afterlife as they want to have their first time...

Cue a delinquent girl (who smokes in the bathroom) and a Student Council member (who guards the stairway to uphold school integrity) scaring every other student from the two spots. Until one day, the two suddenly has the power to see them.

As Oto and Hanako enlist the two to setup couples for them for research material, will Oto and Hanako get to have their first time?
Or maybe their research material is just a bit closer to them than they realize?

last edited at Aug 27, 2017 3:20AM

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

More of this please!

inb4 Sensei is actually a teacher in Kasumi's school.

last edited at Aug 22, 2017 11:29AM

lenne18
Earth Girls discussion 19 Aug 23:29
lenne18
Image Comments 15 Aug 09:45
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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I just got reminded of Nanashi no Asterism. :(

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

@Lyendith
I'm still not convinced that Aika and Hane has a wholesome aunt/niece/sisters relationship, at least from Aika's side.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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The art got me confused this time. I was under the impression that Aika was significantly older than Hane and this in turn, made me wonder why she was at the school with Hane and not working.

Yeah, I thought so too. But apparently, they're only a few years apart. Maybe because Aika has that mature air around her?

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

So... ugh... wincest?

Honestly, I can take Hane and Aika's relationship better than the polyamorous relationship last volume.

Also, in a bit of a surprise, we have Itsuki and Sawa here instead of Ayaka and Yurine.

lenne18
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^ I think Kasumi just isn't aware of it, especially since Nakakouji (May the yuri gods bless her soul) picked up on it.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

I have you know that I am a normal human in good mental health who just happens to play Touhou Hisoutensoku 25 hours a day.

Playing Hisoutensoku
Not bitching about IaMP or HM/ULiL

I found a kindred spirit on the forum!

last edited at Aug 9, 2017 3:25AM

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

Their romance is stalled, but I suppose it's to be expected.

I don't think stalled is the right word.

The more Yurine interacts with people outside Ayaka, the more she understands how Ayaka is important to her.

In turn, this brings down Ayaka's tsun levels, leaving more dere moments.

last edited at Aug 8, 2017 10:03AM

lenne18
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^
She knows the flapjack octopus exists. I think that's a big hint already.

Not only that, she was shocked that Touko didn't. She's an aficionado of this stuff, clearly.

How do you people NOT know the flapjack octopus? Is that even possible? It's too cute not to be known by the whole of humanity. It was even gonna get officially named "adorabilis" :D (I'm not an aficionado or anything just a fan of cute things)

I don't find it cute though...

On the other hand, I find the giant isopod to be cute.

last edited at Aug 2, 2017 5:33AM

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

I met my three sisters on a dating site

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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[...] We all sleep together in one bed (me and one of them).

It's funny how the author seems to believe Nanoha and Fate are not gay.

The only people who don't believe that they are gay are Seven Arcs.

lenne18
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

Is there any mother/daughter mochi?

Implied only, I think: https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/yuri_family

Reminds me that Tsubomi from this short dated the older sister.
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/met_my_sister_on_a_dating_site_ch09#2

last edited at Jul 31, 2017 3:55AM

lenne18
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

^
She knows the flapjack octopus exists. I think that's a big hint already.

lenne18
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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TL;DR What are your thoughts on train?

Nice eye! Unfortunately, Makoto Shinkai made me hate trains.

Trains as symbols can mean a lot:

  • Train tracks separate two people; usually used for bad endings or star-crossed lovers. In the Chapter 2 case, it is used to separate them from the others/the outside world. This means that the Touko that kissed Yuu is her own self and not the one she created to be like her sister.

  • Passing trains usually indicate passage of time in an otherwise still moment. In the Yuu-Touko case, it seems to indicate that Touko is basically living in stopped time while the outside continues on. Also, the river scene is also quite meaningful. Rivers are usually related to the underworld due to various legends about it around the world. And heroes do come and go out to the underworld for their own loved ones. Here, Touko is basically in her own personal underworld, of which she cannot move out. Yuu crossing the river to her and staying, denotes her wish to accompany her, regardless of her situation.

  • Trains in particular also denotes progress. In Chapter 23, it is related to the river scene and their relationship at this point. In case of the latest chapter, they are moving together to a certain destination, but changing trains also means changing the destination as well.

last edited at Jul 29, 2017 12:12PM

lenne18
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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IMO I think it would have been longer if it wasn't marketed as a yuri title in the first place.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

I thought the next page would be a shot of their parents watching the whole thing on TV, that would've been funny as hell.

This needs to be made:

Introduced My Sister to Our Parents as My Lover

and the sequel,

Married My Sister on an Amusement Park

last edited at Jul 27, 2017 11:21PM

lenne18
Citrus discussion 26 Jul 01:39
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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I've been wondering for a while now, what happened to chapter 19 and 20?

There's a bad scanlation floating somewhere around the net.
But last I heard, it's getting re-translated with better quality.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

I'm a little confused, in wich order should I read these chapters? After I read the prologue I came to "Summer Window Syndrome" and it felt like I had skipped several chapters. Could someone give a hand please?

Read it either in chronological order or release order. It doesn't matter much as the stories are basically a bunch of one-shots taking place at a point in their relationship.

lenne18
Image Comments 25 Jul 11:11
Copy90_90_zpscf246422
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Hat

@cameron, A bit of trivia, her VA also does Ano's voice.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

I wish there were some chart of who is who... I'm on the chapter 15 and I am mostly lost who is who and what is happening.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/AnoKoNiKissToShirayuriWo

It's maintained by Lyendith.

Copy90_90_zpscf246422
joined Sep 18, 2014

Met a black knight on a dating site.

The logical conclusion

Not quite: The part where the black knight is also her sister is missing.

There's also the part where the black knight is her boss and older by 8 years.