Well, I think the two student council people definitely need elaboration, we got one facet of their very temporary relationship.
As they never started a relationship, I don't count them. I think it wouldn't take much to flip them though, because they are both tsunderes. Though I and a lot of other people here mentioned before that if there was a spin-off, these two would probably the best fit to have more elaboration there.
The cosplayers too, they're now long distance, that increases the complexity of what's going on by a huge amount.
I disagree. The long distance situation is temporary and they have already gotten into a position where their situation will not be shaken by such trivialities anymore (I'm exaggerating).
Ai and Maya too, I thought they had a bit of a thing, but they didn't anymore later on? (that's also the previous love triangle Canno used in her works, they had one for a bit with Chiharu for sure).
Again, I disagree. It was never implied that Ai had a thing for her. Ai is the only straight girl in the entire campus, which is kind of her role. Chiharu/Izumi was not a love triangle, because senpai was never an option. It was more like a love line (Senpai <-- Chiharu <-- Izumi) with Chiharu eventually just turning around lol
Also, I believe there's a distinct passing of time within the polyamorous relationship, it feels to me at least like a week or two
That's laughably short. There is not a single pair in this story that got together that fast except for them. Canno used a plot device to make it happen and already basically skipped the other two sides of the triangle to make it fit into one volume. And this is very much an issue caused by the polyamory itself, because having more components causes more space to be occupied and thus Canno had to dumb down all the characters and their agency. lol
But again... it worked out somehow. I doubt many authors would have fared better with those limitations.
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