i saw this on yuri projects one month ago, before the vacations, and i'm really happy to see it edited now that i had to come back to work,

best one-shot ever

post edit: glasses girls are always the best

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isn't this similar to chie-yukiko story in persona 4 (i played it only recently) ?

however, in games and manga (and dj) there are so much ideas ...
i wasted 2 precious days of vacation in Venice for the festival, i couldn't stand those presumptious rich stars on the red carpet, working for directors and scriptwriters w/o any ideas AT ALL,
... and the autographs hunters... what a shame...

today, while re-reading this, i noticed how spendid is the first smile of hikawa, at pag. 133,

there's no need to talk about an open-ending, that smile explains all (even before their night together)

I don't ship these guys, but this was adorable.

me neither, but, poor homura, she can't remain always alone thinking of the goddess

i was thinking this was on hiatus...
thanks payapaya

Aren't we all hypocrites.

I guess so. Now wait for me to rave about a piece of fluff with more shortcomings than Citrus just because it's so kawaii desu in, like, two hours. Whenever it is the next Attack on Titan doujin gets uploaded.

ah ah ah, some good laugh in the morning is great, thanks

only one thing: i didn't like the premise too of citrus, because i don't like incest or pseudoincest very much

Then I guess, you should read the tags first before you read it, no?

i don't "hate" incest story, and i can't say i dislike something that i have never read; but you're right, infact i didn't post any comment in citrus post because that manga isn't for me,
usually i like this kind of easy and nonsensical one-shot, but this has (or lack) something i can't explain,

i was thinking about your nick : for example the light and easygoing stories from yuri yuri and yuri yuri (ES) have so much more than this! and the style is more symple and clean, but is really distinctive of the artist,

but i really don't want or need to persuade anyone, i was only curious if i was the only one with this impression

about the art, i found it boring, too clean w/o any distinctive or interesting traits, but this is only my poor opinion.

Those are the reservations I have about Saburouta's art as well, but a lot of technically skilled artists are like that in the beginning. I expect the art to, stylistically at least, develop more with time.

i'm with you, i think he has only to find his style,
to be good at drawing is a good base, but it's not enough

@ Secretnamorifan11 : saburouta isn't a bad artist, but after seing the end of "the flower and the star" and of "notes of the garden..." i really cannot help but see some gap,
if we spend too much compliments for citrus, what we have to say about those other masterpieces?
however, he can do this work; with the right ispiration he'll find his style and make a good manga in future.

about the art, i found it boring, too clean w/o any distinctive or interesting traits, but this is only my poor opinion.

@Underachiever007 : thanks, you have explained better than me what i wanted to say... if your english isn't good, than mine is inexistent,
only one thing: i didn't like the premise too of citrus, because i don't like incest or pseudoincest very much, but the important part is what you say about the lack of humor and charm, and, for me, that forced-angst

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since it seems a lot of people concord on this, i want to say that, instead, i didn't like citrus at all, from the first chapter, and now that i see this oneshot, i can say that i really dislike this artist,
i found these works so cliche (art and writing) than i fear it's my fault i didn't understand the purpouse of the author, and i didn't catch the sarcasm

this is a cult,
all the dj, and above all pag. 9, always made me think to a famous poem of berthold brecht (i can't remember the name), i'm sure it's no coincidence

finally someone posted a comment here, i was thinking i was the only one reading (and enjoining) this manga

Ah.... I still can't get enough of this...

you are right, i also like it, and all the other story of the book, and i see somethings from this artist in progres at yury projects, i can't wait...

this art style let me think to hirao auri, is it only me ?

childhood friend never wins etc.

Like in Kimi koi limit, Aoi hana, Marriage black ?

More like Honey & Mustard, Gokujo Drops or Unchanging Days. Wait...

yes, like in kashimashi... i hated that ending (and the manga isn't good at all)

is it possible to see some other chapter in future, like for kase-san ?
this was one of the best short-serie i ever read, better than notes of garden ..., and the ending is pefect

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i never saw manga so fun with so much copypasta like mizuki maya's,
probably this guy is really lazy, and it's a pity because i'd like to read more of him

i always liked this artist, and the latest work seem a lot more professional, and it's the first time i see a good plot with the ten desideries cast

As much as I hate to say it, I think this falls into the "WTF am I reading" category for me. Just can't quite put my finger on why, but it does. lol

more than "wtf am i reading", this fall in the "what's the point of this" category,
those for me are more like illustrations than manga

can i ask if this is really new or is only uploaded recently?

Release dates are prominently listed. Which is to say, this is from the later half of 2011

yes, i see now, thanks

this is unusual because mokou is one of the most mature character (not only cause her age, but about her personality too) and flandre is... ... flandre,

however, i remember clearly a story not short like this, and well drawed, with this pair, it was about mokou teaching flandre, and mokou was choose, of course, because her immortality,

can i ask if this is really new or is only uploaded recently?

i always liked this, from the start i expected a great confession's chapter, and i'm satisfied (but i'm really sorry for the other girl)

sorry for the OT,
someone can tell me if Sankarea (quite famous, zombie, het, manga from this artist) is a good manga?
i like the art, and i like zombie stuff, but i'd like to avoid pure american-style action like highschool of dead, or some dull love-comedy

i really love the style of this artist, is moe and creepy at the same time

Redundant, I guess. I don't really agree, but that makes sense, at least.

yes, redundant, it was on the tip of my toungue,
at last i think it's because of that

Probably a silly question, but why would this and Office Lady be considered incompatible tags?

yesterday i asked myself the same thing...
however, i though because if it's about OL, it's obvious adult life, it's excessive (the right word don't come in my mind now)