Sounds like this would be a cool prologue. As a self contained story, it would need work though.

Feels like the poly was just an excuse for the two of them to get married to eachother. Though it seems odd that the prince is ok with it.

I like how they challenge the committee member in order to be able to stay in the school; and it seems like some tense showdown like something out of a shonen action series.

And then she's easily defeated.

Ohai Cerberus Syndrome.

Geez, I kinda figured Suika was going to turn out to be a villain; but I figured she'd just be sealing people away.

Are we SURE this doesn't need a yuri tag? Like absolutely positive?

Unless Rei's fanfic is an AU fic, she probably doesn't die.

It was at this moment she realized she was dating a shonen anime character.

Feel like this would be a better manga if it picked a timeline and stuck with it. It really started to go downhill the moment Rinko went back to the past.

The future timeline was more interesting; and we didn't get to see enough of it to grow attached to any of the characters in it.

I'm just gonna go ahead and add that reporter to the Shy X everyone ship.

So, what was gone next morning: the silky or the tub of lube?

Or both? All three have implications that I don't want to think about.

Welp. That was a very Dowman Sayman manga.

I mean, she was dreaming that they were all forced to speak different languages.

Jeez, the mom really fucked up this time. I mean, I can understand the reasoning behind her fuckup. She probably doesn't understand much about mental illnesses like anxiety and depression.

But still, what a shitty think to spring on someone with no warning.

Even female doggies fall for her? Good grief, girl, your sex pheromones are out of control!

But how come it didn't work on the kitties at the pet shop? Even tho it worked on the pet shop employee? As expected, cats are Da Coolness.

(And btw I was kinda disappointed Nagi from this series didn't show up at the pet shop, lol.)

Maybe it did? And it just didn't show; cause cats are natural tsunderes.

Have to say. I find this series way more entertaining than the original.

...I think my OT3 just upgraded to an OT4

Mario: Do I... do I rescue Bowsette?

I see where those hands are, Remilia.

Best crack crossover.

...I'm not sure if this is a boring piece of shit; or a brilliant satire.

Wait, no, it's just a boring satire. I mean, I get that idol fans can be this shitty in real life. But I feel like the way the story was presented is really, really boring.

JUST GALS BEING PALS!

...pals that are super gay for eachother.

I think my main problem with Vivid is the lack of stakes. It needs a Precia, or a Jail; or a rogue Defensive Program to actually put the protagonists in danger.

Vivid is more a sports series than a magical Military SF; which makes it feel divorced from the things we liked about Nanoha.

Also, it should absolutely slow down and flesh out team Takamachi. Before introducing hundreds more characters.

And that boy grows up to be Yuri Danshi

...gonna be honest, this one felt kinda rushed.

Also, with a name like Tsunderella, I was expecting a twist. Like... the stepsister's were actually just tsundere for her or something.

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/sunami_yuuko_to_yuri_na_hitobito_ch02#3

certainly an interesting twist on the "Shoulder angel/devil" concept.