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Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Regardless, I'm not really intrigued on this plot, I think focusing on Ayaka would pull me in more because she is cute and a disaster. To me it feels like AyaMiki will be the end of this part anyway, so all the melodrama feels pointless, basically a filler.

HajiMomo would be far more interesting IMO since there is a lot of potential (angst) from Momoka dating the sister of her dead lover.

Also a bit disappointed that Shiho didn't show up still.

Wow...are you in my brain? This is all exactly how I feel right now except you kept it brief instead of ranting and raving for a couple of paragraphs like I tend to do. :P

I'll probably just start speedreading upcoming chapters for this arc because all this AyaMiki drama feels so pointless and uninteresting. Unless they pivot into HajiMomo, which would definitely grab my attention again.

last edited at Sep 26, 2024 8:30AM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Not really sure any of those factors matter when there's no indication of incest being part of this story from the name, description, and 95% of its content lol. It's just thrown in here suddenly as something of a pseudo-tragic backstory? And it's definitely not presented as spicy.
This isn't about self inserting either, but rather empathy: understanding what the feelings of the character feel like. Wanting to date someone you've grown up with under the same roof is an extremely alien emotion from my perspective, but it's frequently presented as not alien at all, but instead something familiar and understandable. And that is what I don't understand lol.

If we're specifically and only talking about this story I'll agree that it's not well introduced or handled. I should have also said that sometimes incest is included as a dramatic element in media, something shocking that adds an extra layer of complication to the relationships.

Between this and Sasakoi, I'm pretty burnt out on unnecessary incest added just to create tension and drama. But Fluffycow is tired of reading my rants about Sasakoi so I'll leave it at that. :P

At the same time these two manga are fumbling about with incest, Contract Sisters is tackling incest with a much defter hand. It's one of the main themes of the story and not just a distraction. It results in serious consequences for the characters involved and is not just a source of cheap drama.
And the reader can find Contract Sisters compelling while continuing to feel that incest is an alien emotion that's very difficult to empathize with.

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

And before I forget, Happy Birthday to Miyagi Shiori.

Here's a really cute picture of the two of them. I tried posting it myself but couldn't figure that shit out.

https://x.com/komerice_lo/status/1838636208345485701?t=7YXhaaMC-ZDyLQjLUC4WZw&s=19

Cute! Great job capturing Miyagi's grumpiness.

Formatting for in-comment pictures is: ! [](IMAGE DIRECT URL LINK HERE)
But no space between ! and [

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 4:54PM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Two pieces of official art from the next LN volume that was posted on reddit.com/r/yuri_manga:

We were just talking about "Erotic Demon" Sendai and now here she is in color!

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 2:27PM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Sometimes I wonder if they truly expect the audience to be able to empathize being in love with your sister. I at least am fully incapable of that. I've got a big sister, I've got a little sister, I've got a step sister, and I've got childhood friends as close as sisters, and absolutely none of them are remotely on the table for considering attraction. Even as a sexual minority there's still hundreds of millions of fish in the sea so there's not even any temptation, it's a concept that never would have occurred to me to think about without it happening in fiction. I could sorta get it in VC Andrews's "Flowers in the Attic" since they were locked up together and didn't see literally any other people, but that's not the case here or in the vast majority of cases, so why? Does the author just think it's a universal emotion we can relate to or what?

Sometimes it feels more nefarious than that. Sometimes I wonder if there are yuri authors who think "I'm writing about taboo anyway, so why not?" And the potential for that has always rubbed me the wrong way.

Oh wow that's a sad, but unfortunately plausible way of looking at it.
I'd prefer to think of it as a "popular trope" thrown in to increase reader engagement
"Popular trope" in quotes because I don't understand why it's popular. I understand the step-sibling romance trope is popular because it's a easy way to get the love interests living together before they're dating.

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 12:29PM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Ch. 80 is another top tier chapter. Sendai ruminating on the desire for ownership that's motivating Miyagi to give her that necklace is followed by our favorite Shuukura pastime: Gay Chicken!

Sendai lost this one though. Pretty sure Sendai ended things where she did because she was miffed about Miyagi shortchanging her on the kiss. Sendai's "You're so stingy, Miyagi" was left unsaid.

I feel like it's been a while since we've had any gay chicken in the recent JP chapters. Hoping that changes soon, and I'm optimistic the festival date might lead to some.

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I don't know if the other MTL chapters are like this, but it just seems... more unreadable than I expected. Like I said, I can overlook grammar inconsistencies and awkward wording, but it's so jarring when there's dialogue or passages that straight up don't make sense. I don't know how you guys managed to read so much of it. To me, I just feel like all I'm getting from it is, "oh, they kissed in chapter 34," or, "oh, Miyagi gave her a necklace in chapter 79," but nothing more.

Welcome to the MTL experience! I've long said I'm not reading the MTL nearly as much as I'm "interpreting" the MTL.

To further shock you, the text you've selected is actually better written than most of the MTL. This one probably had a quick editing pass to fix the most egregious errors, but most of the chapters seem to be just copy/pasted without any changes. Even super easy to correct stuff like misgendered pronouns are left intact.
ChatGPT does a better job than Google Translate, but it seems to be only at the level of "MTL with a bit of editing" to eliminate obvious mistakes.

Yay! You're at Chapter 80 now! https://amawashigroup.wordpress.com/2024/09/25/part-80-what-i-want-to-do-with-miyagi-and-what-miyagi-wants-to-do-iv/

Really been on a roll lately!

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 10:21AM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I'm just here to find out what the author is planning in the end

I hope it completely derails and they introduce something crazy, like an alien invasion.

Great. Now, I'll be disappointed if that doesn't happen. Thanks.

Madoka help me, I haven't made an image meme like that in probably a decade.

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 10:12AM

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

How do I add a picture?

There's a dropdown menu in the upper-right when you click on your username. Click "upload request".

A user with upload privileges will upload a page worth of new images every few days. There will usually be no more than 2 pics uploaded for any given pairing.

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 10:05AM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

いつか私たちが使うものすべてが、宮城が選んだものになればいいと思う。私の周りのすべてを宮城で染めることができたら、きっともっと幸せになれる。
It'd be nice if one day, everything we used was something picked out by Miyagi. If everything around me became dyed in Miyagi, I'm sure I'd be even happier.

That'd be the more literal translation (not me taking a break at the gym, lol).
染める means to stain or to dye, so you could also make a case for it being, "dyed in Miyagi's colors" to make it sound more poetic.

Thanks for the translation! So, it is indeed a Sendai crazy thought! Silly Sendai wants their apartment to be as saturated in Miyagi as possible! I worry she'll soon reach the point of not wanting to wash things that Miyagi touches because it will wash off the lingering traces of Miyagi.

last edited at Sep 25, 2024 12:57AM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

When I translated it through chatGPT "touched" was translated as "chosen." Makes a little more sense. Sendai wants everything she sees in their apartment to have been picked out by Miyagi so she's always reminded of her.

Ah that does make more sense. Although there is a certain charm in it being another one of those "crazy Sendai thoughts" where she treats every object Miyagi touches in their home as sacred, like it's been blessed by a deity or something.

And about the catch phrase, I like to think that Miyagi's is "you're an erotic demon Sendai-san" lol

Ah that's a great one too! She's been using that one more since they got to college. She has several go-to phrases, whereas Sendai tends to stick to good ole reliable "you're so stingy, Miyagi".

last edited at Sep 24, 2024 11:36PM

DrJamesFox
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joined Oct 25, 2023
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^Funny how that happened twice in the same set of images. I made the same mistake when I saw the thumbnail for this one: https://dynasty-scans.com/images/32040

last edited at Sep 24, 2024 8:53PM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Almost forgot about the latest WN chapter. 353 is up: https://kakuyomu.jp/works/1177354054894027232/episodes/16818093085266469379

"Someday, I hope everything we use will be chosen by Miyagi. If everything around me was touched by her, I’m sure I’d be even happier."

Not the craziest Sendai thought, but still a bit wacky.

I had previously said that Miyagi's catchphrase is "You talk to much, Sendai-san", but this chapter brought to my attention she probably says "you're annoying, Sendai-san" more often.
And of course Sendai's is "You're so stingy, Miyagi".

last edited at Sep 24, 2024 4:58PM

DrJamesFox
Incest discussion 24 Sep 16:29
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

one of my ao3 commenters pointed out that in SC they wrote the legal marriage restrictions for women as a list of male relatives and then "any other woman" and then the other woman part was invalidated by Obergefell, so in theory you can marry your relatives as long as you're both girls like god intended. good luck sisters (metaphorical)

i like moms

some of the best people are saying this

SC = South Carolina, for the non-Americans. :)

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Wow I thought I was a Ninamomo truther but this doujin is really well done. I especially like this oblivious version of Momoka who's supposed to be their "guardian". She's hilarious going on about Gundis like that.

Nina is such a pain to deal with but we love her for it.

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

A lot of Onee-chans today...

Meguru now has an Onee-chan for each arm! Living the dream!

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023
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^Gui when she's told to stop with the content creation for a minute and focus:

last edited at Sep 24, 2024 2:56PM

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023
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Sweeter than Bern x Lambda...not that there's much competition for those psychos

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I don't get the connection between the two.

Both this MC and Asumi are obsessed with some lost childhood friend. Asumi has even passed up on what could be a rather nice relationship with Nanao, to continue burning money on a quixotic quest for Mai.

OTOH, Asumi is cuter. And seems happier (she's having fun) and better adjusted in life, quest notwithstanding. And doesn't go into scary rants. So she's easier for readers to like.

So basically the only thing in common is they've been separated from a childhood friend? That's not much in common. The MC from this isn't even looking for Meguru like Asumi is looking for Mai.

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I don't know how many other people felt this way when reading the MTL (I don't read it anymore or read ahead at all for that matter), but personally, I thought Miyagi seemed way colder and expressionless in it. I was also under the impression that Sendai was a super saint cranked up to the max, but it turns out that Miyagi has more feelings than I expected and Sendai can get really annoyed. Maybe I'll give the MTL a reread up to where I'm at (79).

That's EXACTLY the case. It's been awhile since I've read the early chapters of the MTL but I definitely don't remember many instances in it of Miyagi showing a lot of emotion, maybe that was just down to poor translation. But I just got done reading through the ePub version and with your translation it definitely paints her in a much different light. I totally forgot how expressive she was in the beginning compared to how she is currently in the story. Hope that's not too much of a spoiler.

MTL Miyagi: "I am a cold, emotionless being who will sometimes show small traces of care and affection for Sendai"

Amawashi TL Miyagi: "I act distant because I'm scared of Sendai leaving and to hide my insecurity, but Sendai keeps making me drop my mask to show I actually do care about her."

The coldness she treats Sendai with is still there, but milder. And the reasoning behind her behavior is much clearer.

I don't see as much difference with Sendai.

last edited at Sep 24, 2024 10:53AM

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I'll skip and come back at chapter 60, hopefully they left the room by then.

You're an optimistic person.

Maybe around that chapter we'll be starting another flashback as they're finally getting ready to go to sleep.

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I wonder whats so important on the Yandere girls phone that it keeps getting focused on in some panels....

I think that she's recording her or the things that she's saying so she can listen to later

Oh I like this one too! It'd make for a good reveal to hear her voice playing back through the phone.

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

I wonder whats so important on the Yandere girls phone that it keeps getting focused on in some panels....

My prediction is she's constantly looking at her stalker pics of Remu. Would make for an easily drawn reveal whenever we get to see it.

Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

Yay! A triple chapter update! Thanks for the translation!

And...we're still in that room having a sleepover but we have another flashback. Are they about to die so their lives are flashing before their eyes or something?

Man...I would probably carry a grudge too if my lover broke up with me because their sibling basically threw a fit and ignored them because they were dating someone. At least Sono immediately felt like she messed up as soon as her sister said she broke up with her girlfriend.

DrJamesFox
Nq9nh0qj
joined Oct 25, 2023

It'll be so funny if the older sister only here because she told her husband about the incest situation and his response was, "Yeah, nah, that's disgusting. We're getting a divorce"

Ok this made me snort with laughter