I personally didn't think it was that confusing, just that the setting could have been better explained. I do have to agree with everyone that the end was great though.
I get the whole "hand holding is lewd" is kind of a reccuring joke around there, but tagging nsfw for that is kinda confusing. :/
Yes, I see what you are saying...
...Handholding is such a lewd thing it deserves its own tag! NSFW just doesn't begin to describe the lewdity of such an act, so I propose a new handholding tag!
I wonder where exactly this pairing came from. I know people like the connection the two have in that Kogasa wants to be scary while Sekibanki has a scary ability, but did they ever interact in canon? Ah well, I shouldn't try to analyze shipping too much. Plus this is still really cute, and that's what is most important.
Yay, I was waiting for this type of doujin. Junko's backstory is one of the darker parts of touhou, so I was looking forward to seeing it expanded like this. Of course this wasn't perfect, and some stuff could have been explained better but I still liked this.
^Ah, I was wondering why that ban was in effect. Is there any real reason for it now though, since we know more about HIV/AIDS and can detect/treat/whatever it better? I'm not a doctor or any kind of expert, so sorry if that's a dumb question.