I've been thinking about this a lot lately, and I see it as just a symptom of episodic stories like this. Everywhere I read chapters or episodes of things on the internet, the forums can't just discuss what is happening, they need to weigh in on every little plot point and whether the writer was right or wrong to do it, whether they are cliches, and whether the writer even knows what they're doing. It's baffling, just enjoy the story and trust the writer will get to the end in their own way and their own time. If you don't like the writer, don't read their work.

What's the point of even having forums if not to discuss the manga? I don't see why shouldn't it include discussions about the writing. I enjoy the story but I can't pretend that it isn't a little clunky and abrupt.

Way to misinterpret what I said, haha.

But, Is it actually clunky and abrupt, or does it just seem so to you because it's episodic? All I mean was, People tend to overreact to every new plot element that turns up in stories, and get mad at the writer for daring to actually try to make a story dramatic. I assume you don't mean that. I didn't say you can't discuss the writing, I'm getting at the fact that people are overly critical because they can only see one episode at a time and don't trust the writer to do what they get paid to do.

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I don't understand where are all this haters coming from LOL like, I'm reading this like "oh wow, I see" and "ooh that's cute" but then they come like I RATHER JUMP OFF A CLIFF THAN READING ONE MORE CH OF THIS TORTURE! omg lol did I skip a murder scene? is one of them secretly in a cult in some bonus chapter I skipped?

Isn't every forum like this? I've never liked something on dynasty and people WEREN'T being hostile and negative some in the comments. Might just say something about the kinds of stories I like, dunno.

Anyway, I honestly don't know why anyone would comment anything except about how the best character, Louko, just keeps on being the Queen of Best Characters.

nah it's just forums everywhere. always gotta have hostility and rage :P

I've been thinking about this a lot lately, and I see it as just a symptom of episodic stories like this. Everywhere I read chapters or episodes of things on the internet, the forums can't just discuss what is happening, they need to weigh in on every little plot point and whether the writer was right or wrong to do it, whether they are cliches, and whether the writer even knows what they're doing. It's baffling, just enjoy the story and trust the writer will get to the end in their own way and their own time. If you don't like the writer, don't read their work.

At least Dynasty has the civility to stay away from screaming "die" every time there's a character introduced who ruins things. Those comments really leave a bad taste in my mouth.

Chapter 1 is misspelled. "Enroll" not "Enrol"

Enrol is correct.

Apparently both are, it just depends on whether it's English or Americanese.

I never get why people don't just Google to see if they're actually correct before publicly declaring a correction.

I looked for people taking off socks on youtube and now my Recommends algorithm is lewd as hell, thanks.

i'm lying about looking it up but this is damn near fetish territory

Lol. I don't think so, I'm sure you'd just get a recommendations of other stupid "life hacks" haha.

I am pretty sure Yvonne is supposed to die in every route (except her own, natch), since that's how it usually goes for a villainess in this kind of game.

Pretty sure we've already been told that this is not the case.

I'm pretty sure of that too. There's an "exile ending" after all. The one that Yvonne originally thought she was just on and was free of the heroine before Elsa chased her down.

The series started as a gag manga, no need to take it seriously guys

Anyone who says this kind of thing in response to a lively and fun discussion, I think is taking life too seriously. Try to have fun sometimes, and let others do it too without raining on their parade.

how masive your socks have to be to just just slip out of your feet while walking , i don´t really see another explanation on how she´s able to take them off that way

You've never taken your socks off with just the floor and your foot?
It isn't something that I do often, but just by dragging my foot along the carpet, the sock comes loose and slips off easily. Dunno how easy it is on a wooden floor instead, but the possibility is there if you press down on the floor hard enough to get more friction, I think.

You can also look for videos of people taking their socks off with the toe of their other foot, or the other examples from people in this thread for how they might be able to slip them off, lol.

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https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_wanna_spoil_yoroizuka_san_ch12#3
ngl, Yoroizuka's chest looks like those youtube fish-eye-zoom effects

edit: I love the fluff of this show^^ Need me my yuri fluff >~>

I did a double-take on the boobs. I was like... she's practically bursting out of her shirt here. Dang.

Also, so fluffy. These two are so adorable.

Ch24 had me laughing even though it seemed to keep going around in circles, and then in 25, they actually surprised me with some real change to the status quo? Let's go!
I want protagonist-Kimura-san to have her own little yandere moments too.

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Future Elsa is using the god-mode powers she unlocked at the end of the original game to retcon a Villainess Route into it while live-hacking the Villainess System. It's kind of like doing a heart surgery on yourself... while an angry dog is chained next to you.

Yeah I was thinking, is this Evie from a future where they didn’t end up together? Or one where they did and Yvonne died or something? And isn’t Yvonne someone who reincarnated into a game so does evie know? Or does she think it’s the original Yvonne?
And then there’s the kiss, that would probably have been with the ‘original’ if they were young so like, that’s something.

Ignoring all that though, Evie was getting straight to it.

My friend, you need to change some of those "Evie"s to "Elsa", because while I'm sure I know what you mean, I can't understand the detail because you've written Yvonne every time (nickname Evie) instead of Elsa.

jesus fuck she is stupid

Lmao I love how all the comments are about the orgy situation and this is just ^

This really did make me laugh a lot, because yes, I agree, but it's what we've already bought into with this story.
Thanks for the good laugh.

Yes, indeed, as a character in a story, your god has worked very quickly to grant your wishes. We appreciate that god (author) too.

This was a fascinating read. I really enjoyed it, although the ending was quite abrupt with a lot of feelings and themes left unexplored.

Not that i'm complaining about progress but what kinda phone doesn't pause when you pull the jack out??

Probably depends on the music player?

It's a feature of manga phones

It's a feature of phones throughout history.
I've never had a phone that didn't keep playing when the audio cable came out.
And now there is no more audio jack slot, and it automatically switches off for anything via bluetooth.

rainbow8 posted:

Wow the very first page has one hell of a typo.

Can you tell me where's the typo? Would like to fix it, although if you are refering to the "what're", I it was intentional.

"stoning"

"what're you stoning there for"

Looks like a typo for 'standing' or maybe 'staring'

It's not a typo.

It's obviously on purpose. "Stoning" as in staying frozen like a statue.

That's ... uh .... not a real phrase in English.
The only "stoning" in English is the one where you ... throw stones at someone as an execution method.

Meanwhile stoners be getting stoned with their grass

Still not a phrase. You literally just said "getting stoned", not stoning.

Im annoyed that the tall girl became such a plot point by sowaro just wanting to keep to herself. Always frustrating when conflicts arise in a story due to someone unnecessarily withholding information...

Uruma Satsuki being there wouldn't stop being a plot point if Sorawo told them, the drama would just be different.

rainbow8 posted:

Wow the very first page has one hell of a typo.

Can you tell me where's the typo? Would like to fix it, although if you are refering to the "what're", I it was intentional.

"stoning"

"what're you stoning there for"

Looks like a typo for 'standing' or maybe 'staring'

It's not a typo.

It's obviously on purpose. "Stoning" as in staying frozen like a statue.

That's ... uh .... not a real phrase in English.
The only "stoning" in English is the one where you ... throw stones at someone as an execution method.

Pretty sure this is the new replacement reaction for the surprised pikachu face.

But maybe this is a clue of how to be free of the system forever if they can find a way to give her a real demon nature (with some demon lord help?)

Based on what we've already been told, shouldn't Elsa choosing any route - including hers - be enough to free her from the system?

Hasn't Elsa already chosen a route though? How can she "choose" any more? She chased her sweetheart into exile.

I feel bad for Yvonne, I get that ditching Elsa is bad, but Yvonne just wants answers. She did get possessed (partially?) because of the Witch after all. If I'm getting it right, Yvonne's going to turn into a demon permanently right? Which should help to break away from the system. The curing potion only mitigates the effects for a bit before Yvonne gets used to the succubus nature?

We were just told that what the "witch" gave her was not a cure, but a stabiliser. So basically, keeping her demon nature a bit longer (and maybe making it less unpredictable). The conclusion is that it will wear off.
But maybe this is a clue of how to be free of the system forever if they can find a way to give her a real demon nature (with some demon lord help?)

And, maybe the demon attributes she gets temporarily are less about horniness and more about replacement for the villainess system - just an extra bit of thought.

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I love how these bitches are like "yeah we're still totally normal for going into the otherside as much as we do" and then they just like actively hallucinate, have blackouts on the regular, and are also physically changed vis a vis Sorawo and her eye, and Toriko with her hand. Like they really do think the otherside isn't getting to them...

You gotta remember how weird both of them were even prior to the series starting. Toriko was already deep into Satsuki’s bullshit, and Sorawo was so disconnected from normal life she thought her story about her childhood being fucked up by a cult was normal.

yeah they weren't ever like actual normal people but they sure are both the kind of person to go "hey remember that one time we thought we were talking to each other normally but then Kozakura walked in and told us we were actually talking complete nonsense" just normal things. hee hoo

I don't think they believe at all that the otherside isn't affecting them. They know they have changed physically. Sorawo has said a lot though (even in this chapter), that she doesn't care as long as she gets to have her own little world though. To the two of them, the risks and the changes they undergo are acceptable to achieve their goals.

What a random cliffhanger, we already know from the beginning of the chapter that her real body was asleep, so that had to be a dream body that was a result of the curse, haha.

And also Utena and Azul otp
Utena and Kiwi are otp2

You mean 2tp
You can't have "one true pairing two"

Can someone from the future (a book reader) tell me in spoiler tags if the horns are metaphorical, demon ancestry, the system, etc? Like I didn't expect that at all.

you don't need to be from the future to remember the past. The horns are an lingering side effect of the "love potion" that Elsa used which got her possessed by a succubus.

... although ... you kind of do have to be from the future to remember the past, because you're in the future of the past.

The feels on this one are very conflicting, haha.
Like, why am I okay with her eating people, even if one of them was a mother? I guess because we didn't know them at all.