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naivety
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Given the title, I actually think the author was going there from the start. But yeah, the pacing is... jarring, to say the least.

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Ah, the veritable axe.

I thought this was pretty well done as a comedy series, and introducing Kujou did actually make it funnier so I would call it a success on that front, but looking through the lens of pure yuri I understand how it is a bit disappointing :P I liked it a lot, it was simple humour done extremely well, it even managed to do some character development for Yaya (she's no longer a crybaby in a hell of her own making by the end). Nothing groundbreaking but very competent.

I also don't think it would feel right to end it here with a relationship out of nowhere or whatever, maybe if it was allowed to run for longer it could feel more natural. Contrast that with that other series that's about to end where relationship is almost certain but it was fumbled so badly no one gives a shit anymore lmao

Agreed. I do hope for something like a timeskip epilogue where they're living together or something, but this work has always felt like comedy first yuri second (not that there's anything necessarily wrong with that), so even that is unlikely...

last edited at Dec 23, 2024 9:42AM

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

What is this adorable creature

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Much better than just as friends?! It can't be, does she want to become Roommates?!

naivety
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joined Sep 21, 2019

I don't know about being gifted a lesbian situationship if I carry on, but this was nice.

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

first yuri couple i sincerely don't want to get together lmao. minami should say "i'm in love with kamiya. you had a million chances yuzu sorry bye"

That would be hilarious

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Really cute!

Insert deft fingering joke here

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Also, We all know that when Tong Tong put the choker on Xiao-Lu's neck, it had a double meaning in Xiao-Lu's mind. ;)

Wouldn't have caught that myself, this is 1000% true

naivety
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joined Sep 21, 2019
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If evil why hot

naivety
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^^^^ We don't need a tag for it, surely it's included in the Yuri tag by default.

last edited at Dec 13, 2024 3:01PM

naivety
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More gay ghost cat!!

Where's the tattoos though? This artist has great depictions of them in other artworks of this series. (I was looking since there's a tag)

naivety
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They're just playing tennis, guys, it's okay!

naivety
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^^ Oh wow, she really does. Would've missed it

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

A yuri radar with 50% accuracy: either it's yuri or it's not. Good job, Xiaoxing!

naivety
20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

This was really cute

Also I went ahead and reread everything, Ema is me but with actual artistic skills

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Can we talk about how well-drawn that kiss scene was? The expressions on their faces are just screaming teenage angst, it's so good!

...also Asako casually resting her hand on Nagi's thigh is, uh. Definitely a choice that isn't going to affect anything, yep.

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

...That was actually a pretty smooth rejection.

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

It's always the traumatic private tutors, isn't it

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Dang, Oosawa rocking that look

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

That one shot of feral Marota LMAO

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Lil' sis does have big poly vibes, if nothing else, what with how much she's in love with her big sister (maybe not romantically?, but very much sexually) yet seems to be falling in love with Yanagi without the big-sis feelings diminishing

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

Uhm, the first and second halves seem to be out of order?

Cute work tho

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

The tags and title did setup the reveal fairly well imo (at least well enough that I could see it coming). But yeah, a whole three people? Dang.

The personality of the love interest is probably gonna make or break it. Two people is already more than enough for drama in most cases, so three means the author's probably going for something very specific. The hitman idea isn't all that unrealistic...

naivety
Ma lumière discussion 01 Dec 11:38
20230811_115727_adobe_express
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Is it not? It's pretty relatable (well, the teenage gay angst is), so for me it's pretty hard to see it with other lenses...

20230811_115727_adobe_express
joined Sep 21, 2019

And here's the long promised epik sesbian lex, now featuring a Tongtong mad at her gf!