Why is it tagged twins?
Based on page 4, I'd guess they're at most cousins that looks identical to each other.

The author says they are twins. Just because they didn't grow up together does not mean they are not twins - their parents just divorced when they were still babies or whatever.

I always thought the nosebleed thing was because they see something erotic, which sends their heartbeat skyrocketing which = high blood pressure. Nosebleeds is a symptom of high blood pressure.

It was clear which was the bottom - but it was great anyways :)

I wonder how common having a clear top x bottom is? I mean in RL, thinking of couples I know, I can't say any of them fit the bill clearly for either roll.

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^Yup - I was gona say, you'd expect it to be the other way around.

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^Some cultures yeah - but not Japanese. Sure they do have still a fairly strong belief from their past that is more prevalent than it should be that life revolves around a husband and pleasing /living for him - but not to the extent you are talking about. It is also less and less true the newer the generation. Mostly those sort of beliefs are driven by religious fundamentalism - where in Japan their hangups seem related to social traditions.

I liked that :) I love how they both just went 'oh well' and went with it lol.

Asagi Ryuu draws some of the sexiest yuri out there - and it is not done through over the top explicitness (which never turns out sexy anyways). It is in the lines, and positioning etc - the manga equivalent of what the director and cinematographer do - if that makes sense?

@Loralei - doesn't warrant non-moe art tag - none of the many other Asagi Ryuu series have it either. It doesn't apply to any series that isn't moe if the truest obvious super cute girls sense - they are still attractively drawn and pretty.

Non moe art can often be described as outright ugly, and often very primitive or sketchy, but in a none cutesy way. Or it is very straightforward / realistic / perfunctory , without the smooth curves and exaggerations and styles normally associated with manga. (Some old school styles fit this latter bill).

It's kinda hard to describe accurately - and a few series on the site do not warrant the tag either I think - but no way I'd give Asagi Ryuu's stuff that tag.

Nice :) I've only played 1 of the games but it was pretty good.

The only bad thing about this great doujin is the memories of their fight are drawn from the movie - and hence reminded me of it.

Not that it's a bad effort of cramming s1 into 2hr - but everything important is done better in the original - including Nanoha & fates last fight.

^Mai and saki are the first cures to follow the originals :) It was a good season.

That was great :) You don't often get doujins for the older cures these days!

I thought Plot Device-kun was a butch girl with a short haircut for the first couple of pages they were in.

Me too lol.

Nice 1 shot!

sweet :) I also quite like a 'then they had sex' ending - not that I mind seeing it lol - but especially with comedy it is gonna change the tone so I see why they dont.

^^Sometimes 2 characters just seem like they would make a great couple, visually, or personality wise - even when like these 2, they had no interaction :)

It also helps that they both seemed really nice people, yet we didn't get to see much of them, adding to the desire to fill in the blanks.

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How do you know it didn't really happen??

^ The title is one reason, another is the last panel has thought bubbles coming from the previous to let us know she is thinking it. She is also in the same place and same clothes so no time has passed for it to be a recollection.

What we CAN'T say for sure though is that she will not make it a reality later on lol.

Is this really fantasy? more like (dark) wishful thinking.

True but I hate this tag because it kinda ruins the punchline...

true, just the inclusion of fantasy was odd at first, I would exclude the tag all together if you want to keep the punchline.

I know it is extra effort but I think If tags will spoil a punchline and the uploader cares to, simply leave said tags off, just for like 1 day, then change them. 90% of readers will have read it by then.

p.s. Very funny lol - if in a creepy way. I've certainly wished certain male characters would disappear before lol.

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My Dad lost his 2 year fight with cancer just 3 month ago. All I can say is - Fuck cancer!

I hadn't heard why there had been no updates on the story - and had been looking forward to reading the rest one day.
It was a very good story - and I bet we would have had numerous great stories from her in the years to come but for this :(

Too sad.

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One last none yuri point for Slow start 7 - Did anyone notice the problem with the teachers giant clock / art piece?

Whoever drew it doesn't know roman numerals very well lol.

why no threesome?

^Because it would then loose any eroticism from the cheating - and I assume that was what they were aiming for. Plenty of people don't find 3p enjoyable / erotic at all.

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even if it's hot, cheating sucks

I agree. It was hot & normally I don't find it so - I think it was because she was drunk, & she was gonna stay to carry on and even apologized for it - not that Marisa knew.

And also that I am not invested in Marisa x Reimu - I always thought they made better friends. I prefer Marisa with Alice.

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That is pretty hot! No wonder she is embarrassed to walk around in the club like that lol. Nice art & idea too.

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Ichigo marshmallow is a great series - very funny with lots of moe :) But I can't really get behind any of the girls with Nobue- (even though she acts like she is into Matsuri & Ana in the show) they are too young and the only one who was kinda attractive in that way was Ana.

If a mangaka wants to pair her up with one of the other younger ones that would work better imo.

^^Hollows - And they wont either if she doesn't want them to :) Once they pick up again she will probably watch it all from right besides the bed lol.

Handy skill she has there - I'm surprised other doujins haven't had her use it in a pervy way like this till now tbh.
Poor Flan looked confused but still shut the door lol - I wonder if she understood what was going on?

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I liked it quite a bit overall, especially how it ended :)

But I have to say there are a few places where I can't really follow it and it is confusing.

^Those spoilers are only spoiling in the same way rotten fish does lol.

Ayano & Sakurako already have love interests - and neither of those 2 qualify :)

p.s This was a fun little chapter!

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