I struggle with this story. I think the art is really beautiful, the characters are great, and there's a lot of enthusiastic consent; BUT the point remains that she could have easily explained to her what exactly what it was that they were doing (and that she was taking her virginity, which may have or have not mattered to Kokoro). Kokoro deserved to know, as anyone deserves to know, what act she was happily participating in. It matters.

They have QnA session the next day.

What in the goddamn hell is wrong with you guys...they’re a loving couple in a healthy relationship, Kokoro is naturally a girl that has trouble understanding things and Misaki kept making sure she wasn’t feeling uneasy about this all. You’re really overthinking

Am I the only one who interpreted her laughter as nervousness?
Check the commentaries was a mistake xD

Kokoro doesn't watch grown up TV. Or talk to people much. Or read novels. Or do a lot of thinking. Or maybe she was born 2 weeks ago.

HA!

Both characters love each other very much! Senyuu has high artistic and writing skills. I also like their Dia, Kanan, and Mari story.

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Beautiful story with wonderful characters! Misaki x Kokoro are a cute couple! I like this sweet story!

Beautiful story with wonderful characters! Misaki x Kokoro are a cute couple! I like this sweet story!

So incredibly cute. Comment section ruined it but I am rereading and saying “how cute” anyways.

kokoro having no idea whats going on while effortlessly getting Misaki off has me laughing my ass off lol this writer really knows how to write a good kokoro

also, love this doujin, back here reading for the second time, actually. but one part that really rubs me wrong is when misaki tells kokoro to "stop asking questions" and "I'll explain when its over!" it just comes off as a little creepy.. almost a bit manipulative? but it could also be taken from the context that misaki is a young highschool girl who is doing dirty things with her GF for the first time and shes just nervous and doesn't know how to react to someone touching her like that. so she might say inappropriate things that could be interpreted as toxic behavior in other contexts but in this one is just caused by lack of experience and poor communication skills during these new experiences. either way it creeped me out just a bit lol

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