That was really good! The story, the perspectives, ^_^ the ending <3
Can I be greedy and ask for more from this artist?
Thanks for translating :)

Lovely! Kotori had Umi dancing on her little cute finger all the time.

The expressions and the art were fantastic. Want more. =3

This needs a sequel

Yes! With a flashback to Umi's inevitable flustered initial response to Kotori's kiss. I will happily read as many chapters of this as the artist is willing to produce. ^_^

awww

more with they lovey dovey life! ^^

umis confusion on the last page is my favorite thing LMAO

Cute (≧▽≦)