Wow! I don't know what to think. That is just messed up. Leave her alone. If you were ignoring/avoiding her, then leave her alone. >:| I'm mad.

Yea... Pretty twisted, looks a lot like manipulation due to the inner thoughts... Also those last pages looked really dark (tone).

There is an extra with them...

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I don't really buy how Honoka made up her mind to stop Eri, it feels like it was just for spitefulness 'cause her plan didn't work out as she was accustomed to. Still good read, I hope for more, if there's.

Seems like my previous comment disappeared for no reason. :/

Seems like my previous comment disappeared for no reason. :/

It was listed as a series at first, and moved to an anothology
Heres your comment, thread does not lead to the manga http://dynasty-scans.com/forum/topics/4247-girls-monochrome-discussion

Anthology
http://dynasty-scans.com/anthologies/girls_monochrome

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Seems like my previous comment disappeared for no reason. :/

It was listed as a series at first, and moved to an anothology
Heres your comment, thread does not lead to the manga http://dynasty-scans.com/forum/topics/4247-girls-monochrome-discussion

Anthology
http://dynasty-scans.com/anthologies/girls_monochrome

Ah, nevermind then ^^;

Wow, possessive much? o-o;

Wow, possessive much? o-o;

agreed. that was a bit... o-o; intense.

Well, I very much like to stick with what I see and know so I'll stick to what I saw as a [HAPPY END].

But, taking you guys account with the tones, reasoning and stuff, really hope that original Yuri girl has her [Happy End].
[Best End] would probably me slapping possessive girl on her face if she dares ever break original Yuri's heart.

"I´m Eri´s lover, ok?" The way she look at her, I read it like "If you say "no", I´ll kill you.

this is mess up, almost yandere like.

so cute kawil!!!!!!!! this is just so cute!!

if this story gonna have a continuation, I'm got a feeling it will end in a bad way. Luckily is a two-shot.

ugh, so fickle.

An unexpected and thoroughly happy ending. I'll take it with pleasure.

Haha. I like it. Really the ending isn't bad; even though Honoka's personality is a bit manipulative, the ending wasn't so at all. You could say that by resisting Honoka's manipulations, Eri forced Honoka to be direct about her feelings. Cute end. Gotta say I'm definitely curious about the extra.

Yeah, when I finished reading this, I was plenty confused too. I didn't know what to think when Honoka suggested that they should go back to the way things were before, and I was really baffled that she wanted to go on another trip. Poor Eri.

I wonder if I was the only one who made the connection between the Love Live! names though (Honoka & Eri).

Anyway, the next few one-shots are, I suppose, a step up from whatever train wreck happened here.

I wasn't sure of this at first. I also thought Eri made it up that she was dating that guy, just to get a reaction so maybe they both are manipulative. But a fine read.

I guess if both of them are happy, then I don't mind.