ch4 pg 22, "agel" -> "bagel"

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pg 32, "we so fun" -> "were so fun".

pg 47, "your your dog" -> "your dog"
"lead" -> "leash"

pg 8, "don't really along!?" -> "don't really get along!?"

ch4, pg 16, "we're we're"

pg 4, "for for being late" -> "for being late"

pg 16, "seem to be problem" -> "seem to be a problem"

pg 120, "all its own" -> "all of its own".

pg 12, "you neve" -> "never"

ch 13, pg 3, "wanted thank you" -> "wanted to thank you".
pg 7, "this the place" -> "this is the place"

pg 8, "like when when" -> "like when"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nmyS2vKGPk

ch 7, pg 20, "you warmth" -> "your warmth"

Shit, we made the bad guys too reasonable, lets make them do something unforgivable so readers wont sympathize with them too much.

pg 6 "used used"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7NrAHat93qA

pg 19, "like the put" -> "like they put"

pg 8, "there's a lot of differences to parties with everyone the same gender" -> "with everyone of the same gender"

pg 11, "I can't just act like I know understand all on my own." -> "like I now"

pg 18, "I naive enough" -> "I'm naive enough"

I interpret this dream that Ed is a good role model to look up to.

Wait a moment... "Elisha?" Wtf Ed!? What happened with Eri-chan???

Ed-chan no baka!

Does it count if it is a dream version saying it?

Resort to bribe LOL

I think those are concert tickets.

pg 6, "any yet" -> "and yet"

pg 15, "said a fate" -> "sad fate"

pg 25, "wanna be taken of" -> "wanna be taken care of"