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joined Oct 9, 2010

If you have any, post them up. I'd love to read it, maybe other people too. Personally, I like reading yuri fanfics but if it isn't, I don't mind~ If you want criticism, just tell me and I'll review.

I've only made one myself but if you want to read it... Want me to post it here or read it on fanfiction.net?

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joined Oct 25, 2010

I'd read it, if you'll let me. xD
If you do, doesn't matter to me if it's on fanfiction.net or posted here, either way's okay.

I would offer to post up mine, but unfortunately I don't write fanfiction; just my own strange brand of yuri stories.

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joined Oct 9, 2010

That's cool, too, I don't mind reading it. I'm just interested in reading yuri in general, really.

Um... Here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5893266/1/Practice_Makes_Perfect

You'd get what's going on if you have heard of or played Ace Attorney: Phoenix Wright games.

It's more friendship than explicit yuri but it was my first fic. Maybe you can find some romance in there, but oh well. :P

last edited at Oct 25, 2010 2:59PM

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joined Oct 25, 2010

You didn't mention anything about wanting feedback, so I'm unsure as to how I can respond to that. But I would like to say I enjoyed reading it. xD

Never played, but a few my friends are crazy about the AA:PW games. I kind of want to give it a go, actually.

And I did find what looks to me like the subtle beginning of a romance.
It was nice, xD dare I say... sweet? (Maybe not so much for Scruffy Dummy. Poor Scruffy Dummy.)

Off topic-ish (... please don't kill me for this), I hopped on deviantArt because I didn't know what the characters actually looked like besides the description, and found this lolpicture which I found greatly amusing.

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joined Oct 9, 2010

Glad you liked it. I would have uploaded more if I remembered my stupid password and I wasn't having major writer's block.

I recommend AA: PW if you like puzzles, crime-solving and all that. I know I love it! Favourite female character is Franziska von Karma~

I kinda wanted to add a bit of bittersweetness to the thing so... (You'd know who Scruffy is if you played the game. The second game.)

That picture is so very amusing that I had to hold in my laughter so I wouldn't wake my sister. It was very funny~

last edited at Oct 26, 2010 7:43AM

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joined Dec 30, 2010

ummm... hi... i have an idea of several yuri/shoujou ai stories... i got all the characters down, but i dun have any idea what to name the school or what their uniforms should look like... any1 have suggestions? =)

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joined Oct 9, 2010

I don't know if I can help you because I don't know what your stories are about but I can tell you what I do and what I would do:

Well you can make it a name for the school that relates to the story or make it up. For me, I just usually go to a name generator and if I see one that I like, I use it.

As for uniforms... I don't know if I can help you but usually I like to think of ones that uses a dress shirt and blazer/vest (fall or spring), sweater and long sleeve dress shirt (winter). and if they want, a tie or bow, the student's choice with the school crest on the left chest area or on the collar of all the tops. None of those that resemble a sailor suit. The skirts would be up to or below the knees (maybe above the knees to expose those nice legs >.<... if any). But I'd also give them a choice if they want to wear dress pants because why do all Japanese female uniforms must be skirt? If you don't want the pants thing then they can where shorts under their skirts. It just gets on my nerves. For colours, I always imagined red and purple because I like those colours. I wouldn't really be a stickler about accessories so they can wear it if they want just as long as they have uniform on and it's visible (they can dye their hair if they want to!).

These are my ideas but I hope they give you some ideas.

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joined Dec 30, 2010

thanx for ur suggestions... xD

reading ur post gave me instant flashes of ideas... LOL... =D

i'll incorporate some of it in my story if u don't mind... =)

btw, can u tell me where to find the name generator?

oh, n regarding my story, it's more like several stories in one school... i want to intertwine old stories with the new one... sumthing like that... i dun make much sense, rite? LOL... xD

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joined Oct 9, 2010

You're welcome~ :D

I would hoping that would happen

Sure though I would like to be credited for helping you.

Well I use to have a site but since my computer broke and had to get a new one, I lost it. I used to bookmark and favourite every site that I know I would come back to but now they're all GONE!!! (I had over a hundred pages too sniff) Oh here it is, I found it: http://www.rinkworks.com/namegen/

For your stories... That actually does make sense in a way that I see it. It sounds interesting. I don't think I would mind reading it.

You can always come back to here if you need help. I haven't made many fanfiction (only one but that's because I can't get into my fanfiction.net account) but I have written stories myself (though all of them are unfinished).

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joined Dec 30, 2010

i'll remember to credit u... =D

thanx 4 d name generator... if i finally got some words done, i'll post here about it... y dun u post ur stories here? i'd like to read them too... =D

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joined Oct 9, 2010

They're not typed up, they're hand written. I don't even know where they are anymore, I moved so many times. And honestly, I'm too lazy to type them out or search for them. The only thing I was able to post online was my fanfiction that's in one of my posts above. You can read that if you want.

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joined Dec 30, 2010

first of all, i really hate fanfiction.net sometimes, but it's useful to put your stories out there...

so i've written up to chpater 2, but i'm not sure how to move on from there... if u could read them n give me your opinion, it might help a lot... thanx... =D

Here's the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6616242/1/Welcome_to_Miura

Actually, i wasn't sure about the title nor the summary, but i put it up anyway... enjoy... =D

last edited at Jan 14, 2011 10:44PM

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joined Oct 25, 2010

0_0 I started writing fanfictions (except I've only posted one to see how things go) and I remembered this thread so I came back.

@Above, you have been reviewed.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6646432/1/The_Jade_Phantom
That would be mine.
Sometimes I think I'm going too fast, sometimes I think I'm rambling and being too slow. Blah. Either way, unless someone tells me I should stop writing and crawl into a smaller cave or something IRL comes up, this thing'll probably go on for a good... at least 10 chapters or so.

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joined Dec 30, 2010

hammy, thanx 4 d review... xD

but sadly that was supposed to be the 3rd chapter... i pulled down the first 2 because i thought i could do better, but i still haven't gotten around to finishing them LOL...

you're welcome to come back n check it out... =)

P.S. I have seen the show more than once n reading your story, i could almost imagining it happen!! xD

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joined Oct 9, 2010

Sorry about not replying sooner but I've been busy you know...

Anyways. When I was reading you story before you changed it, I thought it was a pretty good start. However I wasn't able to read the 3rd chapter before you changed it.

Now, I will read the "new" one and reply again soon~

PS. Kinda makes me want to start writing fanfics again

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joined Dec 30, 2010

crono, glad u like it... i'm always trying to change what i wrote, so it never finished, but i hope to finish this one... xD

P.S. i do hope u write more fanfics too... =)

P.P.S. i've put up the 'new' chapters... here's the link if u're lazy to scroll up... =)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6616242/1/Welcome_to_bMiura_b

i'm hoping to not ever read it over since i know i'll keep wanting to fix it... >.<

last edited at Jan 15, 2011 8:32PM

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joined Oct 9, 2010

Oh and BTW my penname on fanfiction.net is ReinaYamiKuro but since I forgot my password for it I won't be uploading on there. It seems that I can't remember the passwords I use on fanfiction.net. When I get writing again, I'll have to find someplace to upload it on.

(I've tried retrieving my password(s) but I never get the email(s), I've emailed the site (twice) and never got a reply for over a few months now)

So... yeah. I may need some ideas though when I decide to start writing again.

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joined Dec 30, 2010

i'll be happy to help u if u need some ideas... =)

P.S. do u have more than one email? if so, try everything since i have multiple n can't remember which email i used to reg, i tried them all... =)

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joined Oct 9, 2010

Yeah I have more than one email but I can't remember the password for that too

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joined Mar 9, 2011

I would write a fanfic but I can't remember my username and password on fanfiction.net ... (Like on this site, so I created this new account). Oh well, I'll just create another one.

last edited at Mar 9, 2011 1:55PM

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joined Dec 30, 2010

when you finally create that account, tell me if you've written a fanfic... i would love to read it... xD

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joined Mar 9, 2011

I sure will! It might take long though. So if you're still interested then.... :D

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joined Dec 30, 2010

Anytime... =D

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joined Mar 9, 2011

I actually wrote it :D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6819573/1/Post_HTT

If you think it sucks, I can stop anytime while it's still early lol.

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joined Dec 30, 2010

read it =D

it's a great story of K-ON after graduation... i can almost imagine the gang getting back together... i wonder if the movie will be like that LOL...

anyways, please continue... =)

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