I don't know what it was but something felt off about this story.

Maybe all the Eri/Umi that's been added recently?

It was cute and sweet, but I think the continuity didnt feel right... or something. >.>

It was a bit confusing and hard to follow at time. At first, I thought Nozomi kissing Eli's forehead was just a thought of Eri and only realized that really happened when they talk about it. :/

that was confusing but I'd take any NozoEri there is out there

What phone number should I use? To dial home?

i think it was ok :E

:E

kinds of sums this up i reckon

For some reason, it felt really rushed, or it must have been all the Eri X Umi
pictures that have been posted.

I definitely understand what you guys mean. :P I felt the same way while doing it, while I was about halfway through, but there's no way I was just leaving it. It's still NozoEri.

As long as it's a sweet NozoEri there's it has a place in my heart.

:E .... Nice title. And Nozomi, I know that is your love letter to Eli :E.

Art was good... But seems a bit off... :E

It was alright, I'll take it!

The flow was so bad lol....
Cute ending tho

:E .... Nice title. And Nozomi, I know that is your love letter to Eli :E.

Now that woulda made a good read, like eli noticing it later then getting all doki-doki when she realizes its from nozomi... if I could draw id be awesome mangaka lol ^_^ :P

the whole thing did seem very un-connected...like more happened than what was drawn?

I agree - the art was good but it was really pretty confusing especially earlier on - it really wasn't clear in continuity or words what was going on half the time.

The doujin has been removed by request of the scanlator (due to some quality control issues). It will be re-uploaded when they release a final version.

Oh, nice, waiting then for the new version.
And thanks for more NozoEli!!!