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GhostlyDancer
joined Mar 2, 2024

I liked where I thought this story was going, but from the blackmail scene onwards the story didn’t feel real. The characters were not reacting in the way I would expect actual human beings to react. Like, if a friend told me they had taken a picture of my junk while I was almost being raped, and that they would send it to people if I didn’t follow their directions, I would not be meekly complying! I would be throwing chairs! I would be calling the dean! I would be calling the police! That relationship would be OVER!

And then there was the lady who just randomly forced the main dude to grab her boob, for no reason, and the Psycho Gay dude who had a emo breakdown in the rain instead of, I don’t know, calling his mom? The story stopped following any logical progression once the blackmail scene happened. What a waste of talent and time.