thank you for this release! this series looks pretty decent and i hope for more in the future. The credits page made me laugh ^.^ i have no idea what should actually be in the bubble but i reckon those words fit perfectly.

But does anyone else think this line "she even does stand up" (pg 16, last panel) sounds odd?
and i think "good look" is missing an 's' on pg 17 (you don't have fix it...unless you're a perfectionist and these small mistakes will plague your mind until you fix them! haha i kid, i kid. this release is awesome)

MrEngenious wrote

Edit: No one's attacked me yet with errors, so I'm guessing it's safe.

you speak too soon....ATTACK! haha jk
but there does seem to be an error on page 4 panel 2, i don't think that 'with' belongs there...