Tone and style wise, this is actually pretty close to skits that Namori could have put in the manga IMO, minus Yui touching herself obviously ( but then again, I kinda headcanon that she's the precocious type for that too...). So good job on the authenticity author-san :O

Yep, especially the latter. It's exactly why I decided to pick this one; it has strikingly similar art style to the original.