The core idea here is really solid, but it feels like they mashed five chapters into one. Not a big fan of this.

I think pacing is kinda subjective, but it feels just right for a oneshot. Though, the end does leave for more to be desired and it'd be interesting to turn this into a series. I like the melancholic and bittersweet vibe this has.

Pretty stereotypical cottagecore SOL, but the body swapping aspect is interesting. Looking forward to when the witch and the queen confronts each other and we get to hear the witch's backstory. Though, I feel like it'd take until 50+ chapters before it happens.

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