I felt like the ending was a bit rushed. Could've gone for a few more chaps but meh, I'll take what I can get. Can't say I'm happy about how they ended up. Mayb if they lived together but still don't do "that" would've been better. Anyway, it's around 7/10 for me
I seriously need NSFW extras. I'm rolling in my bed imagining Misumi would be the top and Ai be the bottom, reverse is good too. Or some wholesome mixed with tongue-rolling kisses is good too.
The ending make me question why would the author even puts Rinna in the main scene at the beginning. I felt like there wasn't enough story about Rinna. All the way up to the amusement park date is good, but to end it a few chaps later is kinda meh. It's honestly sad to see a masterpiece go, and it will probs happens again when I read completed short works.