kind of smart for the magazine to use this expedited second chapter as an ad for the web reader while also pushing past the most expository portion of the story. the sooner we get back to the bitting the better.
its doing a good job at the pov switch tho, not only is sendai's facade totally removed for the reader, you also get the world, ie miyagi and her room, drawn through her minds lens
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