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roobi
joined Apr 16, 2022

No it doesnt work. the idea for the swing is that the girl looking at the guy on the swing is "hiding" and both the woman and the guy on the right are the main focus. Like i see what it was going for but it seems kinda forced with some of the things its going for. Maybe well see like something Romantic or Neoclassical next. cool story fun to reread.