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Hannibaal
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I really like the fifth page. Up until then, it feels like your run-of-the-mill oneshot, and then bam! the actual plot comes out and whacks you and the protagonist in the face. You can almost hear the record scratch!

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It started off so strong and now it's gotten so bogged down... I hope what the author has coming up can actually move the story forward a little.

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YESSSSSS FINALLY

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Is the author a woman?

Said so on an old art page.
https://otakumode.com/sakuragiren

last edited at Oct 24, 2022 10:43PM

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I remember the author talking about kicking up the romance level in the story and wondering how she could make it any gayer. It got gayer.

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Dragon-rider Evie's cool and all but mini-Elsa's so adorable!!!

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stool samples

This girl is human garbage and I love it

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Why is the translation so ba--wait, Windyfall did it, I see.

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Just noticed that in the bottom-left textbox of the twelfth page of the first chapter, there's an error--"nerby" instead of "nearby."

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Pink Ribbon discussion 28 Dec 21:50
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Kinda interesting how neither Lumiao or Yuxuan're wearing their usual school outfits at the end--they're wearing the plain uniform, which is almost the median of Yuxuan's sporty uniform and Lumiao's done-up uniform. That could just be me reading into them changing their outfits with the season too much, though. Even that has some interesting connections--springtime for what?

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poor nanasawa, cucked in the past and the present...