Nice little oneshot.

I can't belive that typesetter is actually new though. Font choice is great, the line-breaking doesn't feel unnatural, and I love that little touch on the SFX on page 5.
The only thing I'd suggest is to put an outlne on the sfx where the background is too dark. For example on page 8 it's still readable, but the outline would make it pop more. If you're using PS just right click the text layer > blending options > stroke (i think), and play with the width until you think it's good enough. Also there are some bubbles where I'd shrink the text a little, because it's too close to the edge of the bubble, but that's just my preference, I like a little space between the text and the bubble.