Dialogue was pretty hokey in certain parts, though not entirely a bad read. Had some decent moments.

Shouldn't there be a hypnosis tag then? Even if it wasn't happening in the comic, it was implied to be taking place? (Also would probably help clear up the confusion a bit)

Eh. It's cute, though personally still a bigger fan of Gloria and Marnie together.

Welp, talk about having the couple I was rooting most for not ending up together. And barely having a proper ending. What a letdown. :C

Pokemon couples are always the best. Lillie x Moon, Marnie x Gloria, Elesa x Skyla. List goes on and on.

Best pair.