U HAUL LESBIANS LMAO

either the baseball player is trans or wants to crossdress. Either way. I relate…

I wanted to experiment a little bit by mixing up those bits to try make it sound more natural and overall make the translation less stiff. I've had tried to translate the ano-s and etto-s (like any normal translator would) in my earlier projects and there were some who complained about my translation being stiff because of it, so I just went ahead with my plan. Looks like it ended up being inconsistent and making the translation a complete mess with full of unnessecary japanglish (like the first user said). I'll try to balance it out and crucially learn to translate those bits in a comfortable-to-read manner in the future. This was just a quick side project but i guess i should've not underestimated internet people's scrutiny over every tiny thing lol.

Thanks for the advices!

Keep on keeping on! Always room for improvement but the fact that you translated in the first place is still super awesome <3

Keeping some random Japanese was just kinda unnecessary for the translation. Just made the whole japanglish situation so awkward. Like old school early 2000s fan translations

So painful ugh

This is a melodrama to the max. What a train wreck. Really only reading it because there’s only a slight trickle of new yuri coming out and the art is nice.

Oh wow that hurts. I know what that situation is like. And that ultimatum....

She’s still a bad girlfriend though...

Did she just...?

Whoa that premise was interesting but the sudden tone shift was intense. I’m curious about where it’ll go now since there’s only two left.