To the translator, I really appreciate the thought that went into it, and I enjoy the work. I actually had no problem reading it, but like most of the others said, it's a bit jarring. It just made her sound too foreign, to be honest. If the other characters are speaking American English as coded Japanese, then the accents of the characters from Japan should ideally be accents of American English. Someone mentioned a midwestern accent as a possibility, and I think that would likely be the best option. Again, thank you and keep up the good work <3