While I have read through the current part of the story, I must admit this is dragging on for far too long, I can understand if this pre-marriage arc lasted for 2 volumes max, with the rest of the story following the natural progression in the lives of the characters, Yuzu and Mei as a married couple going to college.

And if Saburouta wanted to go further, either an epilogue or a volume of their adult life after college, following their careers, to tie up the final loose ends of the story.

so much happened in the last two chapters, i'm having whiplash

Youko dies. Just kidding, she's still breathing. Just kidding again, NOW she's dead. Suddenly: timeskip! Oh hey look, they had a kid! Y'know what, PSYCH again, Youko is back, bc fuck you that's why.

What even is this pacing?

A train going at a few hundred miles an hour, rushing towards a brick wall with no chance of stopping type of pacing.

While multi track driftig?

quite possibly yes, and with the chances of another train coming from the opposite direction.

so much happened in the last two chapters, i'm having whiplash

Youko dies. Just kidding, she's still breathing. Just kidding again, NOW she's dead. Suddenly: timeskip! Oh hey look, they had a kid! Y'know what, PSYCH again, Youko is back, bc fuck you that's why.

What even is this pacing?

A train going at a few hundred miles an hour, rushing towards a brick wall with no chance of stopping type of pacing.

I wouldn't be at all surprised to see if this ends up with multiple endings, with the potential for the harem ending being rather possible.

I'm starting to give up on this series because its pacing is just a trainwreck. The drama seems very forced and unearned. The world building just isnt there. The characters are very poorly developed. It seems like a clusterfuck of ideas with no glue keeping it together

the biggest problem is, some of the ideas of the series, isn't bad, just poorly executed, the author really needed to limit his ideas and develop a story surrounding the main aspect of this series, the author should use the main elements (what is left of it) of the story and let things flow on from that aspect, but what the author is doing, is adding too many ideas which add nothing to the story and further erodes any chances that the foundation of the plot of amounting to anything.

that is the sad part, this just looks like wasted potential, mixed in with softcore porn

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seems like Mei is showing more of her inner Gollum

wait Akari is a slime now. welp there goes the rest of her presence.

Wait. People are really surprised by this development?. It was set up from the literal first chapter. Or were they just looking at pretty pictures. That cant be it either since they also do a good job of conveying general emotional context. What the fudge people!

this is because Kurokawa lacks confidence in herself, seeing her break down in this chapter shows just how lacking she is, when it comes to her own feelings, likely because she is so used to "idolizing" people, that she hasn't learned to love herself just yet.

All this chapter shows, is that Kurokawa, has an inferiority complex that holds her back, she feels like she is inferior to all those around her. I am not surprised in the slightest that this was the case, in fact the first few chapters kind of hinted at the fact that Kurokawa has an inferiority complex.

I am intrigued with how this series will go, some of the comedy elements are abit of a miss though.
wondering what the next chapter will bring to the table, apart from the severed head on the eleventh page of the first chapter.

The ones that say they hate NTR, secretly like it, they just don't openly admit it, I mean, I sometimes go around and say how much I dislike it, but I do like the series, even though there are a few things about the series that make me scratch my head in confusion.

best 2 out of 3, who will win this stare off?

Yang was disarmed at the end of the third season, but was re-armed midway through the fourth season.

Geez Nebby, you need to stay in your bag, especially when Lillie is doing something really important.

Nebby get back in the bag

I think one of the things that I have noticed is that the manga itself is showing that the word "love" in society can be thrown around too liberally almost to the point where it loses any and all meaning, which is what we are seeing with Yuu and Touko, those two have likely seen the word (love) being thrown around without any thought process, almost to the point where it doesn't mean a thing to them.

but what that has effectively done, is that it allows Yuu and Touko to stand on common ground, which could lead to them falling in love with each other, which is almost poetic really. they both cannot really stand the word love, yet they are getting closer to being in love with one another.

So she is Yuzu's stalker, she knows everything about her, watched her from a distance, interested in her, but has never approached her, she also possibly Mei stalker as well, she has that wild look.

this could be interesting.

I wouldn't say crisis, should be like this "their love is chaotic"