Aye Im probably years late the the party but I want to make sure I'm not going insane. Two plot holes I've observed;
1. Elsa has multiple childhood stories that are nearly impossible to line up neatly. She was raised by poor parents, she was raised by a nun, and she is a slave for a slaver who sells kids off to demons. They MIGHT'VE explained this one, but I can't recall anything in that direction.
2. The timeline is nonsense. The "promise" mentioned very early in this series was revealed to have happened during when the villainess went back in time, but this makes no sense. If Elsa remembers the promise before the villainess went back in time, that means the timeline has already been fixed and therefore no problems should arise. Maybe I'm misunderstanding something with this one too, but to be frank time travel sequences are hard to write consistently and I don't blame them if they screwed this up.

I get that, but what is the gag? Maybe I just don't get it. If it is truly going to end on a confession though, I'd hope they give it a proper buildup like what they had earlier. THAT was awesome. It would be a darn shame if they rushed it.

This one really is just running in circles, yeah? I liked it at the start, but some point after friend #2 was broken in it feels like the plot has been lost...

I thought this was a lot more lighthearted than it was, but after these last two chapters I'm actually liking this a lot more now. I just hope it doesn't go the route of just having soprano not change, take advantage of mirei, and saying fuck you to the reader and not have there be any repercussions or the like. I would like to believe the author knows better than that, but I can't rule it out entirely right now, this could go a lot of different ways.As it stands, I'm super intrigued, and ready for more! I also hope they do more with nene, she's a one note character so far. Although I'm not sure what you COULD do with her...

I came hear to cheer on the husband, but apparently it's finished. Worst timeline; villain wins and hero loses. Drama as a genre is really interesting, because it relies a lot on invoking negative emotions in the reader to make them keep reading. But what you should NEVER do, never never never, except if it's a cliffhanger, is end it on a negative note. People leave your story feeling awful and depressed, and it's not their fault. I love reading yuri, have done it for a little more than a year, and there are some depressing ones, but there is a line. The guy is only ever portrayed in a positive light, and as of the the time of writing (6th chapter), the only vaguely bad character trait he has is cowardice. The "rival" is portrayed as manipulative, cruel, and seems to enjoy being both. And who wins (apparently)? The villain. I get invested in your story, your worldbuild, and you reward me by punching me in the gut and beating me while I'm down. Jeez man...

On a somewhat unrelated note, I thought it was stupid that people rant on these comment boards. I see how dumb I was now lmao.